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CLUSTER LULZBOMB chapter 1 . 5/20/2013 Your fics suck because chicks can't write good sci-fi. You maintain a homosexual ass-slave relationship with Fictioneer. I hate your fanfiction because I know you from your high school, I know where you live, and I'm coming to have sweet, sweet SEXINGS!1 with you. You are an necrophiliac pedophile abominations, and you obsession with loli zombie Konata proves it. Lucky Star is a show for MALE otakus, NOT FEMALE. GET OUT. There is absolutely NO scientific basis for anything in your fics. Kanata is FUCKING DEAD, feeding the worms, pushing up daisies. Stop it. You need to BE A MAN or at least GET/STEAL IDEAS FROM A MAN in order to write well. I am Asian, you are not. Your arguments are therefore rendered invalid. Grandma always said, women need to get out of the workplace and back to the kitchen! And I tend to agree with her. Because Grandma is right. And Asian. And therefore DOUBLE RIGHT. But, you know, there's still time to erase this stain of diarrhea from the rap-sheet that is your life. Tabula Rasa, so to speak. All you have to do is STOP POSTING this awful disgusting necro-pedophiliac unborn insanity you loosely call "literature". DON'T LET CARPING TROLLS GET YOU DOWN!?1 |
Reason chapter 1 . 10/11/2011 BTW-Sorry,I meant god. And again,really,MORE twincest on some thrown together pairing,not to mention you make one of my fav characters look brain-dead by risking her name and that of her family on some sleep endused .Im beggining to wonder if you just write this so you can bitch on the reviews later...Anywho,throw your damn sock puppet,[everyone knows it is youes]Fictioneer,at me and barade me with you self righteous,"IM AM WRITING GOD AND YOUR OPINION IS SATAN!11eleven!",crap because I dont care. Just make sure to take your butt of the computer screen after your mindless fantards and blatant sock puppets are done kissing it. -Excuse my spelling,its crazy late |
Reason chapter 1 . 10/11/2011 Ok...here we go...first off,this is horribly for just these characters,but for ANY teenage girl,because no teen talks like this in normal 2 person conversation(other than you and your 'friends'of course). "Seeping into my dreams like sly sweet poison"...Really?No matter how "elaborate" you make these things,if you use words in bad context it makes you look .This is also exhibted when you wrote "Slobbering on the verge of sobbing"or some variation on definately went WAY overboard with that .Theres no reason for you to still be so bad,you've written 8 Lucky Star improvement[[...]]. do they all have to center around pedophilia/necrophilia?WHY DEAR GID,WHY! Now look,Im not your damn stalker,dont sick your sock puppets on me,dont bring up how "YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT YOUR TALKING ABOUT YOU HATER",cause Ive heard it all a real reason to why you posted this literary . |
M.J.W2014 chapter 1 . 3/7/2010 wow A Tsukasa and Kagami Yuri Story Good Job |
XZxYxZX chapter 1 . 2/7/2010 Woot! 30TH REVIEW! Idk why ppl are all criticizing you for this story. It was awesome! They need to lay off, seriously. This is a site where you have fun -3- Write more! |
Solarius Scorch chapter 1 . 10/16/2009 Okay, it was rather stretched... but really funny nonetheless. |
Kagami chapter 1 . 9/24/2009 "It's my name! My honor! ...it's my reputation outside this house that matters most." Because, apparently, I a) am that self-absorbed and capricious, and b) have stopped caring about Tsukasa's honor. And the fact that she looks up to me so adoringly. Apparently, the pedestal that Tsukasa puts me on, is nothing to me. |
Fictioneer Sockpuppet 69 chapter 1 . 9/12/2009 "X" a.k.a FedUpWithYourBS" Jesus, give it a rest, huh? Or is thrashing writers following their own path a twist on your getting spanked? Maybe if you rewrote "Innocence Is In The Mind of The Beholder" enough it might get the excited reviews this story got! Then, you'd only say its sick humor twisted some minds. Can't win for losing! Sockpuppet #69 over and out! (You like that, don't you, lave? My VAA buddies got a kick outta that!) |
FedUpWithYourBS chapter 1 . 8/9/2009 So normally, I absolutely hate bashing other peoples stories, cause I know that we all start off a little fucked up when we write, oocs and everything. But you no longer have an excuse. really, its quite pathetic. How many stories have you written? Oh, wait I'll just go check the top of the page where you have them all listed (modest much?). Lets see, ah 8. Unfortunately I've read those too. They're generally supposed to improve over time, not grow more shitty. I'll even go over some of my favorite parts: ...the anti-truth...? "aptly slobbered"? sweetie, you need better adjectives "exacerbating her pounding pine." wtf? And great. Now shes gonna take advantage of her sleeping sister. twin sister...I'm so disturbed right now. This is weak. Weak plot, weak characterization, bad cliches the works. I'm amazed. And not in a good way. And please, don't sick you're goddamn sockpuppets on me, its quite pathetic that you don't even rely on real fans of the fic to defend you, no, you have to make them up. Yes, I'm talking about Fictioneer, 8th Man, Maxlance and the others, really, you think reviewers are that stupid? |
Chiharu-senpai chapter 1 . 4/18/2009 I heart this story. It was really enjoyable to read, and a bit surprising at the end. Prior to reading this I would've thoought the KagamiXTsukasa pairing too out of the ballpark for me, but you've made this pairing great! |
Ascoeur chapter 1 . 1/18/2009 lol 0_0, never thought it turn out like this! I was about to finish the story yesterday but my mom came in through the door and decided she wnated to go out -.-"... so I'm barely finishing it up right now AND OMG! I ever thought I'd be THIS into it, I SWEAR I'M NOT LYING! I've been a hater of tsukasaXkagami, but now that I've read this one, I'm a little more into it now 0.0...weird...You're the first person whose fic about kagamiXtsukasa love I've EVER read, I've read innocence is in the eye of the beholder but Then I was like.."nah..." It was okay, the story and the wording (real awesome) but I wasn't too much into the story. But YOURS it was cute AND funny . hahaha, weird excuse kagami used haha, actually turned out to be true. I wish I could see Konata's reaction to all this though..o well , and yeah it'd be awesome if this one went on! |
Cloverfield 2100 chapter 1 . 12/9/2008 RE-POST - Please post your feedback and reviews at _ ?userid683012 or if this gets filtered out, just drop a message off at my Fanfiction profile page for me to re-post your review here later. Explanation several posts down. RE-POST This was a cute OVA sequel. It was naughty like the title said but I wasn't offended by it at all. It's obvious Dee Eon doesn't want your reviews so why are you shoving them down everyone's throat? This is a place to have fun not an education. IMHO. Vote for Tsukasa on * * ! |
8th Man chapter 1 . 12/9/2008 RE-POST - Please post your feedback and reviews at _ ?userid683012 or if this gets filtered out, just drop a message off at my Fanfiction profile page for me to re-post your review here later. Explanation several posts down. RE-POST Surprize! Surprize! The angry jealous nut is back! I guess we gotta to add Must Be Seen to her Kagamin/The New York Time Out/KeRose/Wild Growlithe" handles till she finds another and another like a spoiled 5 years old kid! When's she gonna to learn that her lame rant's tired? Dee rocks, sap! And she's hot too! Eat it! |
Must Be Seen chapter 1 . 12/8/2008 ...hmm. I'm really not sure what to say here, other than that I'm completely and utterly confused by what's written here. (And one would have to really -try- in order to confuse me.) Stunned, appalled, etc. Moving on with my calm, gentle, non-carping views, then. I do not believe that Kagami would "just barely [remember] to change the name of who [she] was with"...the subconscious doesn't work that way. (The subconscious is remarkably uninhibited, actually. Trufax.) "But the price! Tsukasa's devotion! Her respect! Oh, but I can't cry over spilt milk now! ... How does it hurt me...?" No. Just no. Kagami would never take advantage of her sister('s trust) like this, if ever. We're both girls here, so I'm surprised that you would refer to Kagami, a girl, as "histrionic". (It's strongly associated with the word "hysteria" -now called "conversion disorder"- and both words ultimately come from the Greek word for "uterus". Again, trufax.) Besides, there's "histrionic personality disorder", which is related to "borderline personality disorder". In short, please choose another word (for example, "melodramatic" or "theatrical"). Better yet, please redo that entire scene. I really can't picture Kagami flouncing and delivering such foot-stamping protestations. (My phrasing, yes, but still...) Ahem. Psychology major. Moving on, then. "Kagami lifted misty doe-eyes back into her twin's." (Bwuh?) "...in which case such perversion's only just slightly more acceptable...it's bad enough I have such corruptive feelings for another girl..." Lesbianism isn't a "perversion" (in Japan or anywhere else), nor is it "corruptive" or "harmful". Class S relationships. Yuri. Shoujo-ai. (And yaoi/BL, for the blokes.) Enough said. (Nor is incest a perversion throughout the entire world. I'm neutral on the subject of incest, but in some cultures, marrying one's own cousin is/was actively encouraged, especially if it meant keeping a bloodline/property within the family. So just because it's taboo where you live doesn't make it taboo everywhere. And no, I don't know the Japanese opinion on incest.) Concording with the previous reviewers, "God's laws" don't apply to Shinto mikos. Shinto beliefs do. Also in concord, we should've been warned for Kagami/Tsukasa. Some people like it, some people don't. Besides, it's common courtesy to state in the summary which pairing you've got in mind. Around the middle of the story, Kagami's feelings changed - she went from lying about desiring Tsukasa (to prevent her from emailing Konata) to genuinely desiring Tsukasa. (Who, by the way, was way too forward in this story. I don't think Tsukasa would be that un-naive, at least not without outside help.) Kagami isn't stupid, and Tsukasa isn't -that- stupid. (And, therefore, shouldn't be compared to a collie, per another review further down.) Spilling three cups of tea on three pairs of pajamas in three drawers (opening each drawer individually?) is a bit much. Also, why would Inori go to college and leave behind her (apparently favourite) nightgown? Also, Tsukasa is so innocent that it would never occur to her to sneak around. The OOC-ness here is appalling. Real!Kagami is calm, and Real!Tsukasa is innocent. Kagami and Tsukasa care deeply about each other...neither would ever think of something like this. From "huddled her head under Kagami's shoulder" to "cuddle against her side with a snore"...that scene appears to take place within a few seconds, based on the dialogue. (No mention was made of the passage of time.) Was this the intended effect? The mere word "psychedelic" reminds me of an acid trip. (Which, by the way, only -one- fanfiction has ever done well, and no, it's not in this fandom.) And talking of words, that's not what "nai nai nai" means. But that's old news. I don't understand why Kagami wants to "concentrat[e] on going cold turkey from Konata" yet "always imagine [that Tsukasa is] Konata". Changing feelings are one thing, but this story moved way too fast - I, for one, was left with a "wham, bam, thank you ma'am" impression. No love, Me PS: I'm a 20-year-old woman. I'm bisexual, and no, I don't like picking on girls. (In before...) |
V chapter 1 . 12/6/2008 Sorry you were forced to do that, Dee. This same name and one or others kept on knocking my stories too so bad that I just stopped writing a lot. They live to put people down and shut them down. I wish fanfiction net went after haasslers like that. You have a great idea and I hope they use it! Good luck your stories and radioplays. |