Reviews for Sleeping with a Monster
Siriusmunchkin chapter 29 . 3/1/2012
Bella is starting to take the necessary steps to rid herself of the monster that is James. Talking to Edward about it was the right thing to do. Knew the PI would find them in Forks. That he is suspicious of James is good. Would be better if he didn't tell him what he knew. But James would just find someone who had no morals to find her. So will Red keep any of the info from James? Will he let suspicions be known to the police?
Siriusmunchkin chapter 28 . 3/1/2012
Hangovers are no fun at all. Glad Bella believes Edward is doing the right thing by not pushing their physical relationship. Rose is right about the emotional part, but it will look much better for Bella when she goes for the divorce to be able to say she has not had a physical relationship with another man. Unless she gets lucky and James is killed. Then it's a moot point. Like the way Edward took her to his parents grave and introduced her to them. No doubt she'll do the same at Charlie's grave. Which brings up the question of if that's where the PI will find her. And then follow them back to Phoenix where James will make an appearance.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 27 . 3/1/2012
James is making his move. Figured he'd hire a PI. So when do we find out what Jasper has been able to uncover? Edward's reasons for not taking the relationship to the next level are not only perfectly reasonable, it's the right thing to do.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 26 . 3/1/2012
Edward is good at getting his own way when it comes to doing fun things with Bella.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 25 . 3/1/2012
Rose's story is sad. And her explanation of why she's been so hostile makes sense. Bella is in the same predicament. She doesn't want anyone knowing. Though her reasons are based in fear of James finding out she's alive and coming to kill her. With any luck her b****ness will take the hint this time. Wouldn't count on it though. And who's putting Newton up to the latest harrassment?
Siriusmunchkin chapter 24 . 3/1/2012
A really good job of how the story is playing out. The telling, the emotions of everyone present, the questions being asked and answered. An excellent job of making it a very real experience. There has been a hint of Rose understanding Bella's plight. Am guessing the abuse she suffered in the Saga is part of the background we have not yet heard here.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 23 . 2/29/2012
Bella has the beginning of her story out. And since James had done this before he knew what he was doing. He had stalked her sensing he had found a new victim. With any luck Jasper will be able to track his history and prove what he's done. Hopefully before he kills Bella or any of her friends.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 22 . 2/29/2012
Little things are coming together. Bella has revealed more of her past Edward. And to find out Ben and Angela are in Phoenix is a very good thing. Guessing however that Angela might not have been quick enough with her mother to keep James from finding out where Bella is. Because we all know he is looking for her and he will start his search in Forks thinking she might try and go back there. She is telling Jasper now so he will have a heads up when James shows up to kill her. And probably Edward as well. He'll probably consider killing Edward first while she watches. Just to let her know that she's reponsible.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 21 . 2/29/2012
So we know James is a delusional psychopath who has, more than likely, killed all the women he has been married to. Wonder how many that is. He now knows Bella is alive. Though I thought she had pawned the rings in Atlanta. They could have been sold to another pawn shop, stolen from the one she pawned them at, sold to someone who then pawned them in North Carolina, etc. Bella and Edward have talked some. She knows he loves her and is willing to do whatever is necessary to be with her. The really smart move would be to talk to Jasper about this. He is a detective and would probably be able to check out James past. But will that be where you go here?
Siriusmunchkin chapter 20 . 2/29/2012
And the fun begins anew.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 19 . 2/29/2012
Good job with how you worked Bella's confession in. If there is going to be a confession. You had Bella mistrusting him when she is really the one who couldn't be trusted all along. Will be very interesting to see how this goes.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 18 . 2/29/2012
Treading on very dangerous ground is Bella.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 17 . 2/29/2012
Tanya obviously doesn't know Bella lives next door to Edward. Bella should be smart enough to remember what he has said about Tanya, and that she would have seen Tanya coming and going. But that would get in the way of the story if she remembered. There is going to be trouble in the near future because Bella isn't being honest with him.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 16 . 2/29/2012
No surprises yet.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 15 . 2/29/2012
Anything with fettucini and/or alfredo sauce would be on my plate. That was a nice dinner and Bella made a good move with suggesting going to the hospital to see him at work. Will be a lot of fun if Tanya is working the same shift.
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