Reviews for Melting
LillyZ chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Wow. An utterly stupid act, but it makes a great story. I always thought Stephenie Meyer made Bella needy of Edward, but didn't show it to a matching extent in her actions in New Moon.
DanaGabrielleEspinosa chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
awesome! i really liked it :) nice job
XxX Fred Weasley's Wife XxX chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
please tell me this wasn't a one-shot!

It was soo good!

update!

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Sushizilla chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
cool idea where did you come up with it?
Feenrai chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
That was...so...disgusting! Lol, seriously disturbing, and I've done some pretty weird/gross SI myself...but that was something else. It'd be really interesting if you made this more than a oneshot, and included what happened at the hospital and what happened when Charlie found out, or Jacob, of Alice and through her the rest of the cullens...very interesting (albeit creepy) idea!
PLLHalebSpoby chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
What happens to her hand in the end? I know that you finished this, but in your mind what happens to her hand?
mariskafan2012 chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
OMG my hand hurts now!

gross gross gross!

very good writing though, good story.

it just icked me out hahaha
jennilonglegs chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
wow...

that was a pretty horrific thing she did there...

but the writing was good
slayerb8 chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
That was totally gross...I LOVED it. Good job, please continue or create a sequel.
DelilahBlueEyes chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
Wow... That was intense. O.o

Amazingly written! I knew what was going to happen when picked up her hand, but I still read it all the way through, and it's a skill to make people want to read your story no matter what squirmy, gory things are going on. Great job!
penName111 chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
Love it are you planing on writing more to this?
Blu The Healer chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
Wow.
Xo.Simply.Jasmine.oX chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
That was really sad but really good too.
toxicwaffles chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
Omg! Write more! That was amazing!
Serpentine-Moon chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
oh, bravo. i like it. lol