|Reviews for Melting|
| LillyZ chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Wow. An utterly stupid act, but it makes a great story. I always thought Stephenie Meyer made Bella needy of Edward, but didn't show it to a matching extent in her actions in New Moon.
| DanaGabrielleEspinosa chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
awesome! i really liked it :) nice job
| XxX Fred Weasley's Wife XxX chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
please tell me this wasn't a one-shot!
It was soo good!
| Sushizilla chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
cool idea where did you come up with it?
| Feenrai chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
That was...so...disgusting! Lol, seriously disturbing, and I've done some pretty weird/gross SI myself...but that was something else. It'd be really interesting if you made this more than a oneshot, and included what happened at the hospital and what happened when Charlie found out, or Jacob, of Alice and through her the rest of the cullens...very interesting (albeit creepy) idea!
| PLLHalebSpoby chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
What happens to her hand in the end? I know that you finished this, but in your mind what happens to her hand?
| mariskafan2012 chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
OMG my hand hurts now!
gross gross gross!
very good writing though, good story.
it just icked me out hahaha
| jennilonglegs chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
that was a pretty horrific thing she did there...
but the writing was good
| slayerb8 chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
That was totally gross...I LOVED it. Good job, please continue or create a sequel.
| DelilahBlueEyes chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
Wow... That was intense. O.o
Amazingly written! I knew what was going to happen when picked up her hand, but I still read it all the way through, and it's a skill to make people want to read your story no matter what squirmy, gory things are going on. Great job!
| penName111 chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
Love it are you planing on writing more to this?
| Blu The Healer chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
| Xo.Simply.Jasmine.oX chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
That was really sad but really good too.
| toxicwaffles chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
Omg! Write more! That was amazing!
| Serpentine-Moon chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
oh, bravo. i like it. lol