Reviews for All Work and No Play |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love it ! |
![]() ![]() Noooo it’s over :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't believe that is where you decided to stop! wtf? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT IT HAS NO CONTINUING! I wonder how I didn't realize this before and also how likely a fanfic with the last update made in 2010 to be updated now in 2019... It was all too good to be true ... GOD I CAN'T BELIEVE I WILL HAVE NO CONTINUING FROM THIS CRAZY/AMAZING STORY! PLEASE COME BACK |
![]() ![]() ![]() This started off really great, not that it's not good now, just it's more of a smut fanfic then one with a storyline... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I noticed a small mistake that bellas parents are dead but in chapter one Bella uses taking care of her dad as an excuse for not sleeping etc. Other than that it was a great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so amazing! Usually the first chapter is just okay because the story hasn't developed yet but this was amazing! You did such a good job. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its been a while since you wrote this do you plan to continue? |
![]() ![]() ![]() The tension between E and B is KILLING ME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this is cute. Wearing her parents wedding bands is nice. Although I'm unsure if I like Bella now. I feel like she's using him a little bit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Grrrrrr... Edward needs a POV too. Haha. Oh well. I will admit I was holding hope to see EDWARD POV. But it's okay. This story is super awesome so I think you're forgiven xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again. This is awesome. I am really enjoying the kind of Christian Grey vibes I'm getting. Very sexy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sexy |
![]() ![]() ![]() This. Is. Awesome. |
![]() ![]() He's kinda creepy...spanking a school girl? Yaaaaa creepy |