Reviews for All Work and No Play
ShadowAngel100 chapter 13 . 12/8/2017
This started off really great, not that it's not good now, just it's more of a smut fanfic then one with a storyline...
ShadowAngel100 chapter 2 . 12/8/2017
I noticed a small mistake that bellas parents are dead but in chapter one Bella uses taking care of her dad as an excuse for not sleeping etc. Other than that it was a great chapter
ShadowAngel100 chapter 1 . 12/8/2017
This is so amazing! Usually the first chapter is just okay because the story hasn't developed yet but this was amazing! You did such a good job. Well done.
starsmina chapter 13 . 5/23/2017
Its been a while since you wrote this do you plan to continue?
Mrs.ArgentK chapter 13 . 7/17/2016
The tension between E and B is KILLING ME!
Mrs.ArgentK chapter 8 . 7/17/2016
I think this is cute. Wearing her parents wedding bands is nice. Although I'm unsure if I like Bella now. I feel like she's using him a little bit.
Mrs.ArgentK chapter 7 . 7/17/2016
Grrrrrr... Edward needs a POV too. Haha. Oh well. I will admit I was holding hope to see EDWARD POV. But it's okay. This story is super awesome so I think you're forgiven xoxo
Mrs.ArgentK chapter 4 . 7/17/2016
Again. This is awesome. I am really enjoying the kind of Christian Grey vibes I'm getting. Very sexy!
Mrs.ArgentK chapter 3 . 7/17/2016
Sexy
Mrs.ArgentK chapter 1 . 7/16/2016
This. Is. Awesome.
jk chapter 13 . 12/8/2014
He's kinda creepy...spanking a school girl? Yaaaaa creepy
Guest chapter 13 . 10/27/2014
Weird story... Really funny ...loved it
PLL92gal chapter 13 . 9/4/2014
Nice chapter!
HiraFrance chapter 13 . 5/4/2014
Hey, I hope you'll finish it someday cause I can't get enough of them. Really lile your story *mwah*
readermind chapter 13 . 1/12/2014
i really hope you continue this story :D
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