Reviews for All Work and No Play |
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Chibi-Chan12 chapter 2 . 6/1/2009 Great chapter! btw, you said 'Alice was a lame bloomer' instead of 'late bloomer' o_o or maybe it was an accidental insult? xD |
Sheeijan chapter 2 . 6/1/2009 I am so surprised yet excited to see you continue this story! I really had enjoyed the oneshot (probably way more than I should have), it will be exciting to see how Bella will change with this relationship. Her home life is just so sad - it must be absolutely terrifying for her to be moving across country like that. I guess though in a way she's uniquely qualified for it since she has been alone for so long. Friends are great but at the end of the day she went home to an empty house. It will be interesting to see how he and Edward's relationship will continue at Brown. Thanks for writing! |
princess07890 chapter 2 . 6/1/2009 Sounds great so far! |
fangbang chapter 2 . 6/1/2009 yay I'm so glad that you decided to continue this story ;o). I remember reading it a while back and really enjoying the characterisations and obviously the super hot sexing haha. what I like is that there seems to be a depth to the characters, which makes the smut so much better when there is something to back it up :D. |
icefang7 chapter 2 . 6/1/2009 i really like this so far! thanks so much, can't wait for more! |
colacherry chapter 2 . 6/1/2009 yay! glad for a continuation of this! i can feel the awesomeness already! |
schoeppc chapter 1 . 6/1/2009 Thanks for continuing this wonderful story! You really do an amazing job. |
twilightfan4ever09 chapter 1 . 5/30/2009 i love this one-shot. is there a full length story for it or is there going to be? |
LauraLeeOr chapter 1 . 5/29/2009 so hot-thanks! |
Bastos chapter 1 . 5/28/2009 Loved it please turn to story! Too lazy to sign in but email is . |
goldenrose37 chapter 1 . 5/23/2009 The end is so cute... otherwise thats fantastic! Please make this into a story |
ExperimentalMe chapter 1 . 5/22/2009 I totally, fucking (in Edward's hot language) love this story! It's so well written. I'm glad you took the time to write out full character development for Bella. Just seeing glimpses into Edward was intriguing as well. I love dirty talking Edward. Bravo! Count me in as wanting a full blown story. |
Joey chapter 1 . 5/17/2009 Oh please make it into a full story! It's so promising already, I love it! |
secamimom chapter 1 . 5/14/2009 Can I just Aw at that last line. I loved it. I would enjoy reading a full story with this. |
SarahMarMar chapter 1 . 5/13/2009 I would def. Keep reading this story if you made it a full length one... |