Reviews for All Work and No Play
Tricia dSC chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
I would relaly like to see this story expanded to a multi-chap fic if only because I want to read how the two of them develop their relationship after her high school graduation. And how will her parents react when they find out that their daughter's loving boyfriend was the assistant principal? So many things to read about, one of which includes the hot sex (of course)
Helese chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
Please make this a multi-chaptered story! So far so good!
nanymilan chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
WOW. W-O-W.

I think I need a cold shower.

NO. I NEED a REALLY COLD shower.

Thanks for the new fantasy you give me!

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!

;)
NoLongerAFanfictionReader chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
wo! This story was great! I definetly would love it if you continued this story. Maybe even got the 1st chapter out 4 my birthday on May 7th (just kidding... kinda ])
flecour chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
That was fantastic!
RedSkyAtDawn chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
Please continue this story! It sounds so interesting!
trutwilightfantasy chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
UNG! Whew, that was HOT! I would love to read the full-length story. I can't pass up dirty talking Domward!
Twilight's Abercrombie chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
Oh my gosh plz

make it into a full lentgh

story plz plz plz plz plz.!
TheDay'sEye chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
I love the last line.
edaddict chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
love it, love it, love it...please keep going!
Pixi3Fae chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
omg tht was so romantic and hot
Brittz303 chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
I WANT THIS TO BE A STORY! i cant put it any simpler. its awesome.
Hyper Puck chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
So cool!
mudpuddledemon chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
Holy canoli that was sizzling hot! Wow. The image of her layed out across his desk is one of my top visuals from fanfics ever. Yum. I'd be delighted with more, and I hope for both me and Edward's sake Bella keeps some of those little plaid skirts in her closet!
Jessica chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
I loved the story...please continue :)
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