| Reviews for All Work and No Play |
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   Blue-Winter-Angel chapter 1 . 11/9/2008 Wow. Dammit! Why can't Edward be the principal at my school? WHYY? Ha, anyway. I love it. The ending was just... just.. -heart explodes- IT WAS SO CUTE! -Sniffles- I want him to hold me.. Anywho. Great job. |
| Bella-Tragedia chapter 1 . 11/8/2008 Holy sweet shit... O.O I need to find my bf and make him role-play with me now... DAMN! :D |
| berrykiss11 chapter 1 . 11/8/2008 Umm.. DEFINITELY WANT MORE! lol Turn it into a full story! PLEASE! :-) |
| razorbladcherry chapter 1 . 11/8/2008 that was hot. i think i need a cold shower now. |
| eternalsunshines chapter 1 . 11/8/2008 I loved it! And I would very much love it if you turned it into a full-length story. Great job! |
| Darkchyld1980 chapter 1 . 11/7/2008 That was by far he longest one-shot I have ever read, and by far the best! I loved the wine analogy at the end. "It means, dear Bella, that I was meant to hold you." Damn that is one sexy and romantic line. Kudos to you for writing it. I will await your next work of fiction. |
| JordanElmore chapter 1 . 11/7/2008 wow that was hot! you should definitely continue. |
| Bulls in Brooklyn chapter 1 . 11/7/2008 YAY! Nobody Move, Nobody Get Hurt and Chick Lit are the only We Are Scientist songs I know, but I love both of them |
| all sunshine makes a desert chapter 1 . 11/7/2008 Oh... That's just... HOT I would absolutley love a full-length story. Please? |
| 73fawnscott chapter 1 . 11/7/2008 I really enjoyed reading your store and I hope you do decide to add more chapters. I was thinking you could even expained on what you have written. |
| R.A. Byers chapter 1 . 11/7/2008 absolutelty love! please say u'll continue it! if u did, i would absolutely love it! |
| The Assumed Nun chapter 1 . 11/7/2008 WOW! Incredible! Please do make it a story it is to good! :) |
| 0190ns chapter 1 . 11/7/2008 that was to damn sexy man...lol doin that w/ ur teacher damn... |
| elphabacy35 chapter 1 . 11/6/2008 That was HOT! I loved how you built up to the sexy stuff. I, for one, fully support you continuing this! |
| yourmamasface chapter 1 . 11/6/2008 Do it. Make it into a full fledged story. I'm just glad that it isn't illegal for them to sex it up anymore. |