wow! i loved it! you should make this into a story. god it was hot!

well, it was really long. admittedly i don't usually read student/teacher lemons...

but this was HOT!

and really well written too.

i hope you DO continue. it's really good.

those last lines were ablsoluetly amazing

"i was meant to hold you"

totally awesome

Great story, I wouldn't mind if you made it into a whole story. Would be interesting to see how they cope with Brown. I can see Edward dominant side coming to life once Bella meets more people like Mike, or perhaps it's Bellas turn to get jealous ... So much you can do with this story. Loved Edwards sweet side in the end, -they are meant to be together.

This was very good. I will read if you make it a full story.

That was really good! You should write more of this story, i wanna see what happens! and lol thats not what we do at my detentions!

lots of love, lorin

Aw! The wine comment was so cute!

I wouldn't mind a full length story. That was HOT!