Reviews for All Work and No Play
romanceaholic chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
Bella packing up all her belongings she was taking to her and Edward's new apartment. Sad because the house in Forks was all she knew. It was like leaving her parents and comfort behind to something new and different. Living in an apartment, going to college, and living with her husband. Going from childhood, adolescence, to adulthood (married woman). Creepy about Edward's mom can't even act interested in her son and his new wife. Just self absorbed into her own needs and wants. Bored to be there to say goodbye to her son. Carlisle must have been a saint to stay with her all these years.
Otakugal chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
update soon!
Shante17 chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
oo...ruff Edward has come out to play!...but what's the problem with the communication here?
CharmLightLove chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
Is edward bipolar or something? Talk to her!

Great chapter.

Love this story.

Please update soon.

Nicffwhisperer chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
I'm glad you didn't abandon your story. I'm also glad he didn't leave her or vice versa bc it seemed headed that way with the sadness before. Really hot sex scenes seem to be your forte lol. Keep up the good work.
LoveForever14 chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
ah love it! update soon
jerseyhalliwell chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
*fans herself*

such a hot chapter to come back too! i always feel like doing a happy dance when you update :)
Pat4pin chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
Great this story so much.

So glad you decided to continue this.

Thank you.
justreadit8 chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
You know, you don't update this all that often, but I have to say that I am impressed every time it comes around. I totally buy the sort of skepticism that Bella has about how this relationship will work (rather than the fantasy taffy most other writers spin which gets a little rote) and I am intruiged by Edward's mysteriousness. I am very curious about his past. And the s e x, well, let's just say that's an A for effort. I'm a little jealous. Kudos!
Atlaxxxx chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
He froze cause she called him her husband didn't he?
cgoodwi2 chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
Wow, Edward is so full of surprises. He's emo one moment and dark the next. Bella better keep on her toes with this one. Can't wait for more!
cshorte chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
Loved it!
steflynno chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
another wonderful chapter. i really hope these 2 get their communication in order. can't wait for an update :)
sadtomato chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
That was fucking hot, but kind of disturbing. I'm wondering what is up with Edward? Could he be the bad guy in this story? I'm wondering if he's older than he told Bella... hmmm. Very intriguing. Thanks for the update!
Eternally Addicted chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
I am hoping that since there was no sign of fear or apprehension from Bella that, this was just play with him in the end of the chapter. I have some alarms going off in my head and that kind of bothers me. I am trying to ignore them because he has never done anything to harm her. But the fact that he was estranged from his family, well I guess not so much that since they clearly had issues, but no friends and what not have me tiny bit worried. Should I be, is Edward going to have some deep dark secret?

Other wise great chapter!
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