Reviews for All Work and No Play
justreadit8 chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
You know, you don't update this all that often, but I have to say that I am impressed every time it comes around. I totally buy the sort of skepticism that Bella has about how this relationship will work (rather than the fantasy taffy most other writers spin which gets a little rote) and I am intruiged by Edward's mysteriousness. I am very curious about his past. And the s e x, well, let's just say that's an A for effort. I'm a little jealous. Kudos!
Atlaxxxx chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
He froze cause she called him her husband didn't he?
cgoodwi2 chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
Wow, Edward is so full of surprises. He's emo one moment and dark the next. Bella better keep on her toes with this one. Can't wait for more!
cshorte chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
Loved it!
steflynno chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
another wonderful chapter. i really hope these 2 get their communication in order. can't wait for an update :)
sadtomato chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
That was fucking hot, but kind of disturbing. I'm wondering what is up with Edward? Could he be the bad guy in this story? I'm wondering if he's older than he told Bella... hmmm. Very intriguing. Thanks for the update!
Eternally Addicted chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
I am hoping that since there was no sign of fear or apprehension from Bella that, this was just play with him in the end of the chapter. I have some alarms going off in my head and that kind of bothers me. I am trying to ignore them because he has never done anything to harm her. But the fact that he was estranged from his family, well I guess not so much that since they clearly had issues, but no friends and what not have me tiny bit worried. Should I be, is Edward going to have some deep dark secret?

Other wise great chapter!
Unchanged Affections chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
Haha! Smexy ending ;-)

I wonder why Edward got so weird about telling Bella it was the first time she had called him her husband. It was cute that he got so excited about it )
slyt chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
OMG i forgot how much i loved this dark and dominating Edward holy fuck he is so hot...but damn it what it going on with him? He has not been right since that day Esme had that car accident and Bella said she had no one left or no family left..

But holy shit...spanked her got her all worked up and then stopped and don't her not to pull her jeans back up .. omg what is he going to do torture her little by little till there get there.. get her worked up and not allow her to cum... holy shit he is so hot... Now i can't remember how old he is ?
candy6princess chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
great chapter
jennayg123 chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
Well Edward definitely has a dirty side there! Totally didn't see that one coming!
KimberlyAnnT chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
what the hell was wrong with Edward toward the end of the chapter and I'm not talking about the spanking...
Hope Edwards chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
that was just mean poor bella stuck in there for another 6 hours thats gunna be hell lol

so good to have you back
Guppie37 chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
Holy cow!
Team66fan chapter 13 . 6/14/2010
I don't know who is in more pain right now, Bella because she has to wait 6 hours for potential release, or us... your readers who have to wait even longer. It's not nice to tease!
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