Reviews for The Thief
Fireflamesinferno chapter 2 . 11/14/2008
This is awesome. I really like the style you're writing in.
The Rockerbabe chapter 2 . 11/14/2008
Great, amazing fic you have here! I wouldn't be nervous if I were you! The last scene was beautiful and I can't wait to see where you go with this!
Roberta Sparrow chapter 2 . 11/11/2008
You've just GOT to update. Please! I'm begging of you!
Jan chapter 2 . 11/7/2008
Love the story. keep writing
prettyxdangxcool chapter 2 . 11/7/2008
omg! that was amazing! please write more! love how the characters interact with each other.
mit chapter 2 . 11/7/2008
i like seeing Elle so vulnerable

keep going
ElleGrey chapter 2 . 11/7/2008
Again, this was a wonderful chapter. As good, if not better, than the first. I absolutely love how you would write a sentence and then add in parentases what Elle is REALLY thinking. That was very creative and you have lots of writing talent.
ElleGrey chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
Very good, very well-written and completely in character. I really enjoyed reading this and can't wait to move on to the next chapter!
BloomingSparrow chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
Cool! I love Sylle, and I like the way you summed up Sylar's feelings.
mit chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
good fic