Reviews for Dark Underworld
asStClairewashere chapter 9 . 10/3/2012
You're great at writing but, I read the stories in the order this fic says to but i still don't know what war everyone keeps mentioning. Did you write about that?
asStClairewashere chapter 7 . 9/30/2012
auburn, crimson, cinnamon, ruby, blood, sunset, etc. i love the color red and all but why does it have to have so many names?
Riot chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
who doesnt love rape...i noticed ur tenses are a bit off. its ok i have someone fix mine bcuz ennglish isnt my first language. ~Riot
Riot chapter 27 . 1/1/2012
hi...soooo confused i reread the last 3 chapters about 3-4 times each but... yeah. my computers being stupid and not letting me stay logged in but would u care to elaborate a bit i dont really get the end. ~riot
I-love-Coffee-4life chapter 28 . 11/20/2011

eh oh well
I-love-Coffee-4life chapter 19 . 11/20/2011
summer skool sucks

love this story
zombiecupcake'eats-you chapter 28 . 10/10/2011
awww i love this to mind rape ur other stories lol it took me a long while to read this but i injoyed it, especially the ending chapter thingy
ItWasEpicAndILol'd chapter 28 . 7/28/2011

This story was so awesome! I couldn't put it down, once I got started. :D

I just love the twists and turns and bends this story has that make it awesome. )

Also I heard a quote from a book I read once, it kinda reminded me of this story.

It was:

"Once upon a time, an Angel fell in love with a Demon...It did not end well..."

I know it doesn't really fit in with it in some parts, but in others it kinda does. )
this-account-'s-very-dead chapter 28 . 7/16/2011
this was an amazing story.
Colette's a Bimbo chapter 28 . 4/22/2011
Omg! This fic was extremely good! I finished it in a day!

I sort of didnt get it cuz i only played the first half of Chain of Memories but it still somehow made sense. Great, now im obsessed with kingdomhearts again

thank u for writing such a great fic! :D
the nobody that luvs chapter 2 . 4/15/2011
i was wondering if roxas and axel r gonna fall in love? Even tho now i hardly dought there will be fluff T.T wat eva time to find out!
roxas chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
JadeDawn chapter 11 . 3/23/2011
Awww that chapter was cute. I think that's my favorite so far :D
JadeDawn chapter 5 . 3/13/2011
Honestly girly, you have one of the most professional styles that I've read here on fanfic, keep it up
JadeDawn chapter 3 . 3/12/2011
Oh my, I never would've guessed that English isn't your first laguage! Excellent job
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