|Reviews for The Fun of Dirt|
| ArcanineOod chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
aw, so cute!
Tracey insulted Brock V_V
I enjoyed the story, especially when Tracey started bawling! Soo cute!
| Tobi Katsura chapter 1 . 11/6/2008
1) "Together Tracey and Daisy started the process of cleaning up the kitchen and the Lab in general. Wipes were made, scrubbing of the stove was heard, and laughs were tuned in. Though long and tedious work was done, in the end the two were sitting on the floor holding hands."
In my opinion, you could have added a little more humor into this. One little humor-filled sentence would have sufficed.
2) "... even after a tickling session by her and her sisters."
Tracey The Sensational Sisters (including Misty) One very lucky dude.