Reviews for Kiss
elegantordie chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
I really liked this, it was heart-breaking but lovely just the same.
Fuzzyfur9 chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
somehow this is cute yet sad and a bit funny...poor ed xD

good story
Eliza Poufsouffle chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
It's a sad and beautifull story. Poor Edmund. I love the pairing and I love the end of this story.
Milarca chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
Edmond, Oh Edmond. I love the pairing though :)
WishFlower chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
Great story! I think you captured Edmund's character perfectly!
mia-dcwut-09 chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
the ending killed me that was so heartbreaking
allweknowisfalling chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
Awww. This was so sad.

I liked the idea of Edmund and Susan and their pretty faces.
Beizanten chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
So sad. poor Ed.
alyuchiha913 chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
OMG that was so SAD! That was Edmund! Good work with this!

Peace Out! _
Highqueen Julietta chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
i am speechless.

that was to sad!

rock on.

Barkers3 chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Oh no, how sad :(

Damn you Susan and Caspian!

Awesome story!
Mi-chan.HxS chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Poor Edmund!

I think he is much more beautiful than Susan.

I've never read the books (I would like to read them,if I had the chance), but I didn't like Susan since the fist film.

Well, I really loved it!



PS: Sorry if you couldn't understand my review. I'm quite useless at speaking and writing English.
Shiva'sGirl chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
this was really good. poor edmund! well done
Lizzy chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
What was Caspian thinking? My heart aches for Edmund, but I don''t think Caspian deserved him. Or was it that he thought Edmund had betrayed him first? This story is a little confusing because we only have the one point of view and no backstory. But that's also part of the charm. And of course, now I'm curious as to how Edmund and Caspian will relate to each other when they meet on the Dawn Treader.