Tony should have ponded on Gibbs instead of the bag.

Amazing then got ruined by the poorly written ending

NICE ONE

Awesome.

This is definitely one of the better description of the release of tension between the two that I have ever read. I really like your style!

Very cute. Poor Tony! I love this story.

very sweet!

This was good. Thanks.

Oh, I loved this. Awesome. When I read the lines, "He was shouting now, the words ripping out of him. 'I did it all without you!'" I think my heart stopped.

That was... exceptionally well-done. I loved how you worded it - that "the words were *ripping* out of him," implying that the control he's been holding in for the last four months were slipping hard and fast. And then the next paragraph of how that last line took all the strength out of him and he just collapsed, but Gibbs caught him. God, I loved this scene. Perfect in every damn way.

This was an awesome fic...

Definitely worthy of missing scene status! You captured Gibbs and DiNozzo perfectly! Keep up the great work.

I could see something like this happening, especially when Gibbs did come back. Even though Tony was glad to have him back, the way he just threw him to the side was kinda sad. So this story really sums it up.

My first thought is, 'how on earth did I miss this amazing story?'; the second is, 'thank goodness I've read it now' and third - I thought the intensity of Tony's distress was brilliantly written and Gibbs' subsequent action was done to perfection. A really, really great read.

These 2 episodes really needed further exploration, and your story fits in very well. I particularly like your Gibbs' characterization, very well done! looking forward to read more of your stories.

Loved it! You captured how Tony must of truly felt! All that frustration and anger, great job! I'm glad for the conversation in the elevator, you got the dialog down very well. I hope you have more Tony stories soon! They don't have to be too long!