Reviews for Perfection
imcoolyouarentha chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
OK, this is a pretty decent story. I know the song, you're right!
Wei chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
Hello! Your novel is fantastic! I love it!

By the way,I am Japanese. I write novels and run on the Internet , just like you do.

Because I was really moved by your novel, can I translate it into Japanese and introduce your novel on my page?

I'll put your name on my page, I promise.
Lord-Strath chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
Really cool short story. Leaves you wanting more yet also gives the satisfaction of leaving it as is.
zzzDASDFGHzzzz chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
Wow. This actually made me cry, which is very rare. I don't feel to good about my own KimiTayu fic, which has all the sentimentality of a rock. 'Tis my new favourite.
Tentenperson-Temari cosplay chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
aw... thats so cute! :3:
Liquescency chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
'Twas absolutely beautiful. I really liked how you described Kimimaro's 'perfection' by comparing him to the winter, with all the beautiful snow and all that. It was also impressive how you managed to create such a nice piece out of only 300-ish words!

Erza Scarlet chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
Very sweet! I love it!Though the ending was a bit bitter sweet. Kimimaro is perfection.

I'll be sure to listen to the song beloved.