Reviews for Missing Moments
twilightmom67 chapter 1 . 11/6/2008
Loved it! And I love the original story, so this extras story is much appreciated!
X.Black.Black.Heart.X chapter 1 . 11/6/2008
aww!this is so cute)

edwards so sweet!D
Jennmc75 chapter 1 . 11/6/2008
I like the missing moment. Of course Edward would hold her hair while she puked. Always the gentleman ;) I can't wait to see what else you've got up your sleeve
akaMrsEdwardCullen chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
hehehe...great idea, one can never get too much bella and edward...m especially edward. Anyway, on the other chapter, you should definately go for too long, since such a term doesn't really exist. A chapter can never be TOO long. It can be Too short and that just sucks. So when u update the other fic, make it too LONG, I wont mind :D
joan chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
that story made me smile. Update the real one soon, please!
Sammize chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
This is CUTE

i laughed and I awed.


ITs cool
Delilah Lovett chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
It was nice and cute and funny to see that missing moment. I love how she has no idea what's going on or who she's with. Feel sorry about that hangover but funny still. Love the missing moments. Look forward to more :D
Sovoyita chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
This is fun. I liked this little snippet. It kinda gave me a feel of what Bella was thinking in the time that she was puking out her innards. Anyway, keep up the awesomeness!
ericastwilight chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
This was good. I like the idea of missing moments. I liked that he held her hair for her. Does that mean he wasn't as drunk as she was? Or just handled his liquor better? Can't wait for the update.
Ssenillek Reh chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
Aww, it's. So. Cute.

I love it. :D

The thing that amused me the most was that you had the whole bit about throwing up down to a T. I just was reading it, and nodding my head, like, "yep, that's how it is, that nasty throwing up shit." XDD

And Bella drunk is amusing. Hilarious, really. It was so cute, and it made me laugh so much. What was the "twin" she was trying to kiss, or whatever? I can just imagine her clinging to a lamppost and trying to French it or something. XD

Edward doesn't seem to be AS drunk as Bella - but, maybe that's just me. He's a cutie, what with the water bottle and everything. What are husbands for, indeed. Can I eat him up? -gets whipped cream ready-

Bahaha. So, anyhoo. I loved it - and I'm looking forward to more! Anything extra for TDDUP is definitely a good thing.

Can't wait for the next one!

sirodro chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
Dear DLC...

BRILLIANT! I LOVE this "missing momment" and hope you will instill more of them as you go. It really really is such a cool idea and adds so much to an already awesome story. I cannot tell you how sweet I found this chapter to be. It really added a lot to the story knowing this happened...makes me appreciate their situation more and gives me a deeper respect for Edward (not that I don't already respect that incredible man beyond reason anyways). For Bella's part, it shows how she was feeling (in every aspect)from the stand point of wanting to be with him, enjoying his kissing and how touched she was by him staying with her even in the state she was in...these types of things I find very interesting and I love knowing all the "tidbits, details and such that seem to get deleted"... lost if you will. Keep them coming...brilliant!


Doris V.
skitzofrenic chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
haww this is adorable

i absolutely love those two, especially in Till Death Do Us Part

feathersxo chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
This is a really good missing scene from Till Death Do Us Part. I love that story too by the way. :) Good job, I love this.
Jayeliwood chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
lol poor Edward. And Bella is a bad drunk
freakyhazeleyes chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
hilarious! good idea to post the missing stuff! i can't wait for more!
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