Reviews for The Heavy |
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![]() ![]() AAHHHHHH- |
![]() ![]() I do enjoy this story, but the reason why I don't like stories like these, is because it kinda has to pay the price, which said price is Sonic's character. Sonic is a hedgehog who doesn't abide by the law, and he does whatever he feels like, and just plain breaks rules. But here, he kinda needs to act the elder in sittuations like these, but that in turn gets rid of his character. It's not a bad thing, it's just jarring to see Sonic act like this, but at least still has some of that Sonic substance to it. Excellent work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The side that we don't see... It feels so weird for me to imagine Tails doing something of the sort in public considering how sensible and mature he usually is. But then I remember he is a child of not even ten years and it becomes plausible. I love the mushy, caring moments between those two and I do like Sonic's attitude in dealing with the issue. |
![]() ![]() :I love you with all my heart and envy your skill at storytelling. |
![]() ![]() :you know I feel every time I read this story a burning admiration |
![]() ![]() : Anyone who supports this story is a lover of literature and quite understands the stresses of child rearing. Check out his other works too. |
![]() ![]() for the last time and make clear this story is a sonic gold should be like that and also if you believe in that model of discipline you will be a good father |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man. Sonic can be savage when in parent mode. But a parent needs to be savage sometimes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very very cute :) |
![]() ![]() I will tell you your story is fantastic sonic is an interesting guardian here and I'm glad you really don't believe in this model of discipline you will be a perfect role model with your children people like you are the reason why I want join the fandom |
![]() ![]() ![]() kegger, something tells me that you're overreacting a tad. Read "Sonic talks to his anusSomething like that) and call Sonic someone worthy of raising people. I dare you that. If you can't see my point, fanfics won't always show characters as perfect, you gotta deal with it. Also, very well done fic, well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() To "Guest", who decries this story but has apparently felt the need to leave 3 separate reviews to that fact; I would probably take your "criticism" a bit more seriously if you bothered to sign in on your "reviews." As it is, you are entitled to your opinion, even stated thrice over, but I don't feel like defending my artistic choices for character development to a ghost. Good day; Asher Tye |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not crying. I'm not crying. T_T God. Such stories make me mourn. (These and many others). Really, I have not stopped reading each scene. This story has been incredible. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story. It show what parenting is like and tells both sides to why and how it feels to do the actions. Nice job again and keep up the great writting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fanfic is so old . . . but it totally deserves another person saying how good it was! |