|Reviews for Bonne Foi|
| zveka chapter 41 . 9/7/2013
Love it love it ...
| PurpleBrina17 chapter 41 . 9/2/2013
a different take on vampward. I really liked it.
| xshynenstarx chapter 40 . 9/2/2013
I totally forgot to tell you other aspects I loved about your story. I loved how you had the whole James and Victoria storyline. I liked that she wanted Edward for more than just James dying. I loved the whole Tanya and Jacon thing. I also liked how his pack when on to deal with the troublesome vampires after Aro was killed. So glad the volturi were destroyed. I love that Bella got to spend a lot of time with he father after she turned. I loved Bella's powers. This story was amazing
| xshynenstarx chapter 41 . 9/2/2013
This is a wonderful story. I'm sorry that you've decided not to do a sequel or future takes. It always makes me sad when authors don't continue their beautiful story lines. Bt the story was fabulous. I loved how you developed their relationship and it we integrating to see how Bella survived high school with out Edward there. This was a great story
| kara chapter 41 . 8/31/2013
Great story! I can't believe it took me this long to read it. Just enough sexy time without going overbaord and still a good plot. Well done! :)
| Renee Aubin chapter 11 . 8/27/2013
This seems more stalkery than anything canon Edward did: ‘How could she know about that? I had heard her running water in the restroom while I was talking to him, and I'd listened to their conversation all night. He hadn't told her anything.’ Jeez.
Loved Bella standing up to him over threatening Josh, especially that she does not back down. Fun way to end it: ‘Bella crossed her arms and huffed. "I still want to be mad at you."’
‘I wanted that last night with her before I had to abstain for three days.’ Yeah – not like he’ll miss her or anything.
I found it oddly touching that he’s scrupulous about this: ‘"I'll miss you," she sighed sadly, nuzzling into my shoulder. I knew some sort of response was expected, but I couldn't say it back and mean it, not the way she would interpret it…’
‘…a lazy, almost teasing rhythm and rocked us gradually closer to the edge.’ Yummm. So the vampire can do more than fast and furious.
Funny: ‘Even I was capable of realizing that a good boyfriend did not follow his girlfriend to the library and harass her for sex after she'd stated her need to study.’ And of course he speaks French and Spanish. Probably Italian, too, huh?
Charming library sex – Bella gets her fantasy!
Revealing question from her: "Oh, God, when does it stop? … The wanting…I can't stop wanting you…so badly…" As I’ve said before, I love how honest your Bella is.
A nice image, heaven for a vampire: ‘All that was left was the steady thump of Bella's heart…vibrant, humming life in my arms.’
| HawraaN chapter 16 . 8/24/2013
i felt pain for bella when he just said they needed space. damm it edward
| percy roks chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
I just finished reading Bonne Foi! Its an amazing fic! I have always thought of Edward as a part of the Cullens. Its just so weird when Edward and Bella consider themselves separate from them. And I was also wondering if you were going to do an outtake about their wedding?
Anyways its a great story. :)
| mustlovertp chapter 41 . 8/20/2013
Great story! Thanks for sharing it with us xoxox
| percy roks chapter 3 . 8/20/2013
I have just started reading the story and I love it up till now. Wow. Edward seems so... cruel? in this story. Its a change from all the romantic, sappy Edwards I've seen so far. I don't know if thats a good thing or not yet. Anyways you are a really good writer and this story has an amazing plot :)
| Renee Aubin chapter 10 . 8/16/2013
Funny: ‘But why shouldn't I enjoy this? She was warm. It was a pleasant sensation. Where was it written that I couldn't soak up this little human's body heat while she slept? I was a vampire, wasn't I? I lived outside of rules and boundaries; I could do whatever I wanted.’
Excellent, seeing Edward argue with himself why he’s different from the despised Meursault. Yeah, just keep talking.
Yes, this is definitely abnormal for a human: ‘"I sleep really well with you," she sighed contentedly.’
Clever: ‘"What about you? Do you know what you want?" she challenged.
"I know what I want right now," I said before suddenly flipping her onto her back and wedging myself between her legs.’
Delightful take on Bella: ‘Only a girl like Bella would pick existentialist literature as a good topic for note-passing in class.’ Later: ‘It was so clear for her, I realized. She knew just who she was and what she wanted. I…I envied her. That's what this was. I envied her naïve innocence, her easy belief…’ Partly the naivete of her age, no doubt, but also a true strand of Bella.
She is bravely and charmingly genuine with him: "Really?" She was pleased. "You just made my night so much better."
‘Bells? What kind of horrid nickname was that?’ Thank you! I hated that in the books and still hate it in fanfic.
Oh my! I love his solution to her annoying coworker: "Yes, Bella, I want to fuck you. Right now. I want to take you hard and fast and I want you to scream so loud that everyone in this place knows who you belong to." Definitely more fun than peeing on her leg!
And then he’s not satisfied that the poor guy heard all that: ‘He backed up a little at my approach, and I leaned over the counter, the better to scare the crap out of him.’ One of the things I love most about your story is how Edward is so clearly a vampire!
| Amineh1825 chapter 41 . 8/7/2013
Awesome story! Though, I was hoping one of them would have changed Charlie.
| Renee Aubin chapter 9 . 8/6/2013
He’s such a good influence: ‘I'd planned to talk her into skipping the classes she had after this, but she really might as well skip this one, too…’ Well yeah, with the skirt and all.
Now here’s a useful vampire power: ‘I swiftly parallel parked in a single move that startled Bella.’
Nicely phrased: ‘Oh, I could admit I was fond of her…but it was like the appreciation one had for a good book. I enjoyed exploring her world, unraveling her secrets, but eventually, the book would end and I would place her back on the shelf, satisfied.’ And yet later, ‘Oh, she would be the death of me one day.’
He’s so sentimental … ‘Really, this was getting to be a lot of effort just to make sure her stomach wasn't growling while I fucked her.’ Ha ha ha.
Nice moments working on her paper together in the library, after he finds her asleep on the table.
Hmm, she’s brave to admit this: "I kind of just…want to be around you. Even if I'm sleeping."
Yeah, he can tell himself whatever he needs to about this: ‘She fell asleep quickly, but I remained where I was for some time, relaxing under her warmth, listening to the sounds of her soft breath and beating heart.’
| palasluna chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
What a slut! Just kidding, good idea, a normal girl
| laurenventi chapter 16 . 8/1/2013
Read this while listening to 'This Is What Makes Us Girls', which if you know the song you know made it very saddening. Hope they're back together soon.