Reviews for Bonne Foi
hammondgirl chapter 4 . 1/4/2009
God - thinking about Edward & self-gratification is kind of mind blowing hotness. So, I am off to read some more...
COOLEO678 chapter 5 . 1/4/2009
YOU ARE FANTASTIC! I love your Edward he is all dark and twisted inside its is fabulous! PLEASE UPDATE SOON
hammondgirl chapter 3 . 1/4/2009
For some reason, this is totally reminding me of my college hook-up/boyfriend. Weird. He was totally like this, but not as helpfull like at the end of your chapter. LOL - :D
hammondgirl chapter 2 . 1/4/2009
I actually love that this is all EPOV. It is way more interesting that way, in my opinion. I mean, Bella has all the same questions your readers do at this point, so why not just entice us (and her) with a bit more of the mysterious and brooding Edward? :D
hammondgirl chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
Now this is a hot, new, and different storyline. Onto Chapter 2, eager for more...
araeo chapter 5 . 1/3/2009
This is a really nice story. I'm very intrigued by your Edward. Very true to canon, yet so much darker. In the beginning, it was almost like he was a cross between Edward Cullen and Dexter Morgan - and for me, it can't get any better than that!
DefineDelicate chapter 5 . 1/3/2009
oh! please tell me you'll update soon! i love it, i want to know what happens next! lol please update!
MyriadProBold chapter 5 . 1/3/2009
I really enjoyed this chapter. When is Edward going to see that bella is worth more than just sex? Soon?
elsanna813 chapter 2 . 1/2/2009
you are amazing.. O.O wow! what a story!
I-Love-Trunks1 chapter 5 . 1/2/2009
I really love this story!

Cant wait for more!

Update soon
guerrilla chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
one of the best alternate universe Twilights around. I saw an interview with Stephenie Meyer saying that the only dream about Bella/edward that she has had since the original one was that Edward told her she got it all wrong...that he did, in fact, drink human blood.

So it's interesting to explore that possibility.

Write more son!
sayit3xs chapter 5 . 1/1/2009
Update soon. :0) Can't wait to read more
jbluvs2sing chapter 5 . 1/1/2009
I so love this story! Great chapter.
99imjon chapter 5 . 1/1/2009
Hi, Happy New Years! :D

I just read this story (at least the first five chapters, haha :D), and I must say I really like it. The plot is really intersting, though I do miss the rest of the Cullens. But I trust you to put them in there somewhere... I think... :)

Bella and Edwards interact really cute together, and it's nice that they have a class together. I wonder if you're going to put Bella's Lullaby in here, it doesn't really seem like a thing your Edward would do, but then again he is changing when hanging out with Bella. xD

I hope you update soon :)
Katerina Petrova Salvatore chapter 5 . 1/1/2009
you have an amazing story. very well written
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