Reviews for Bonne Foi
truehazel chapter 5 . 12/27/2008
I just love how bad Edward thinks he is. It's like he's ashamed to be nice. She says he's sweet and he's like, 'What? I'm evil. Don't go telling people I'm sweet, I have a rep.' Maybe that's just my overactive imagination, but I was amused.

Yet, he's still himself in some aspects...As it should be. I've said it befoer; I appreciate how natural you're making Edward's transformation into something decent. I think the reason he is so evil is because he

s always felt he had to be. He never knew he could feed off animals, and he figures that since he's already lost his soul he might as well pretend like he enjoys it. But it must be terribly dull, the same thing year after year: College, hunt classmates, degree, move, college, hunt, move, hunt, move, hunt, Move...

I wonder if he's realized how truly pathetic his life was before? He was nothing. Something no one would even notice if he was gone. Just a waste of space. And it's only through Bella that he is anything at all.

Hmm...Food for thought, is all.

jEsS
stavanger1 chapter 5 . 12/27/2008
oh, edward is starting to question his "lifestyle." it's getting really good. can't wait til he realizes he's in love with her. it has to happen eventually, right? Right?
Creampuf99 chapter 5 . 12/27/2008
That was way hot! I like where this story is going and how Edward is developing into a more Twilight-esque Edward with every chapter. I am thoughrouly(dont think its spelled right... sorry) enjoying everything about this story the pace and characterizations are very well developed. Thanks and update soon!
Romance4ever chapter 5 . 12/27/2008
Edward is a great shower buddy.I really enjoyed this care.
AMayes chapter 5 . 12/27/2008
Great chapter! I'm enjoying the evolution of Bella and Edward's unconventional relationship!
CryHope chapter 5 . 12/27/2008
I am so PLEASED when I saw the update alert on this story.

And oh man, that shower sex? Yea... delicious. Just.. m.

It's wonderful to see Edward out and about the campus; here's to hoping more sexy time!
EastAngels2009 chapter 5 . 12/27/2008
this is great. please update soon.
mcs530 chapter 5 . 12/27/2008
I'm so glad I found this story-it really is a unique take on the Edward/Bella relationship.

Excellent work, and I'll keep looking forward to updates!
Sunflower33 chapter 4 . 12/27/2008
Wohoo! I love this, I love the role reversal that Edward is hearing Bella's voice.
Kept In Spades chapter 5 . 12/27/2008
Awesome chapter! Your Edward is turning out to be my favourite. :)
Sheeijan chapter 5 . 12/27/2008
I love this horny Edward, ready and willing to screw Bella's brains out and actually proactive in seducing her. It's refreshing to see vamp Edward and human Bella like that. I also find it interesting how he's changing and doesn't realize it. He actually watched her taking notes in class and wasn't bored.

I'm dying to know more of what Bella is thinking. I'm fascinated with her as much as Edward is!
ScarletRubie chapter 5 . 12/27/2008
good but i have a question, you know when Edward lurked outside? HOw did he see Bella smiling? maybe through Angela's mind, i guess so it just seems odd. other than that very good, congrats woman you've got FANS, you've already got over 400 reviews for 5 chapters you're very good i wish i were that good.

-toodles
robsmom chapter 5 . 12/27/2008
aagain a nice chapter
paperboats chapter 4 . 12/27/2008
I love all the little moments that hint that Edward might be starting to develop real feelings for Bella, and jealous!Edward wanting to shove that boy's head in a blender was a great image! *cough* However, I think this story is due for an update... *puppy dog eyes*
xxxpanzyxxx chapter 4 . 12/27/2008
-new reader-

i'm amazed, i've never really

taken interest in stories under

Edward's POV; and i must say you story

really caught my interest. )

can't wait to for you to continue it

and for me to read it and review it.

this has become my favorite story.

x
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