Reviews for Second Time
Cheza1 chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
smile ofgreat ness
Hanamaru chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
very hot and cute!

Hana
SSOTVDG chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
The smut was weak,it could of used detail, it was intresting though. wording was a bit sketchy, and your vocabulary may need an update. It was, an intresting one, and your depiction of yuki was almost square the cum play, by the way. keep up the good work. your a talented writer,if you hone your skills you'll do much better. very intresting story...if i havn't mentioned that yet.
KitaraStrife chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Great job! Send sun's and starts my thanks for talking you into writing a sequel! (XD) Either way, it was really your own writing that brought this to us. ;)
Unrelenting chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
damn...
DieBratDie chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
Can't...stop...nosebleed...O.O Teehee, I liked this one! :D
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
thank you for the chapter i love it thanks so much don't forgeat to check out all my stories you can find them all in my profil so please read and review
Black.Misfit chapter 1 . 11/6/2008
Nice chapter! Very sexy!