Reviews for A Fine Line
TheArcanaQuotes chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
Yay_ It was short sweet and maybe wil be continuuedd?_

*gives a cookie*...get another cookie if you decide to make anotherXD
SilverChelle chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
Review #100 to you from me lol. no just kidding. This was good, just like the others, and I think the most profound part was the very end. The three ending sentences are very poignant. Together, I feel they form and aphorism. (You'll learn about those in a couple years, if you don't already know. They're just small statements that have a truth about life in them.) Well, adios.
whiterose2406 chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
A sad, but relatively well written take on the Volt incident.

Also, the battle was cool. Good ol' Zelos coming to Sheena's rescue. If only the others knew how he really felt about her.

I think my favorite part though, is at the very end. When you state that, even though they may squabble with one another, and Zelos may play around with her, they don't hate each other. I'm glad there are people out there who understand this. Seriously. _

Overall, a nice read. :3
Faux Promises chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
Hey, great job again! I really, really liked this one. The theme was good. Their relationship is very love/hate but I think it's far more than that too, I like the way you portrayed it. Great job!