Reviews for The Collapse of Dreams
DarkNamikaze chapter 3 . 4/23/2013
best romance scene of narutayu I've ever seen. please keep updating
erching chapter 3 . 8/21/2012
will you ever continue this has so much potential
Kyoki no Kage chapter 3 . 1/24/2011
r u continuing this story?...its really good so far...

im willing to help with it...
Kyoki no Kage chapter 2 . 1/24/2011
cool...that was a cool way you described their emotions... it was just epic...
Kyoki no Kage chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
man it was a great story...i liked how you explained narutos anguish and how he fell to the floor seeing red hair...that was cool man... i hope you continue this story...
Still Not Dead Yet chapter 3 . 6/5/2010
Wow a very interesting story. I was wondering why Naruto was on the run. And Shizune works for Danzo! I like where you're going with this story and I hope you update again soon in the future!
Wolf Lunerfang chapter 3 . 5/28/2009
Wow, that was good. I like how you made the story click like you have. Good job and keep it up. Update soon please.
meringun chapter 3 . 5/14/2009
you better update this story soon, or i'll send the kyuubi to your house!

Good story, btw
fox chapter 3 . 5/1/2009
why can she sudenly walk it makes no sense
DarkNaruto21 chapter 3 . 4/11/2009
Great fic , update soon.
Getsuga Tensou chapter 3 . 3/22/2009
nice story, keep up the good work
Marutectz552 chapter 3 . 3/21/2009
This story's is pretty good, Hope you update soon, as these Fic's are always interesting...
Uncle Joe chapter 3 . 1/24/2009
interesting most of the usual run of the mill Naruto gets betrated are flimsy in their depiction of it...this is really good man
Fox-Sama chapter 3 . 1/24/2009
Nice work I rely like were you are going with this.

so did Naruto remove Tay seal or just get rid of the negative part and she can still use it?
spedclass chapter 2 . 1/22/2009
Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!
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