|Reviews for Loose the Hounds|
| Sorrow Reminisce chapter 11 . 5/17/2013
Now THAT is the kind of agreement the transgenics & government should've come to rather than the crap Max Allen Collins cooked up (or was told to cook up - whatever) in the books. I'm still sad that you were never a writer for the show - S3 would've been in the bag!
Holy crap I thought you were going to kill Alec - seriously thought you were going to do it. Only remembering that you've written follow ups to this fic kept my lil' flame of hope alive.
I've gotta stop reading. I have a new chapter of an old old fic almost ready for posting, and I took a brief break to read one of your fics - now it's 2am and not only is that fic of mine still not up, I'm just trying to tell myself 'one last chapter' so I can shut down the 'puter and drag myself off to bed. The family are not gonna appreciate tired grumpy mum in the morning - I hold you accountable!
| Sorrel2009 chapter 12 . 4/12/2013
Can't think how many times I have reread this story and it is still one of my favourite Max & Alec stories - always brings a smile to my face!
Thank you for brightening up an otherwise dull & rainy day, x
| EmmyLou74 chapter 12 . 1/21/2013
I can't stop smiling! I love your stories but I hadn't got to this one, god knows why. You capture the characters so well, Max and Alec (obviously) and Mole (I think I may have a weird crush on him now). I laughed, I cried and now on to the sequel yaaaaaayyyyyyy! Thank you!
| tumbling-down-and-down chapter 12 . 11/30/2012
It's an awesome story! please do continue writing DA fanfics! esp when alec's in them :D it's sad that DA's ended but at least there's fanfics to keep us going! thanks for writing!
| takewhatchaget chapter 11 . 11/29/2012
Just wanted to say that i hated those post-series books too. All of the stuff i have read on here has been at least 1000000000000000000000000000 00000x better. yours stories are among the MUCH better ones
| talichernin chapter 12 . 9/16/2012
Hands down the best DA fanfic I've ever read. Pleasure to read.
| l chapter 12 . 3/26/2012
Wow! This was really good! I loved it! Especially loved the end of chapter 10, it was so chilling and heartbreaking with Max counting Alec's breaths like that. Thanks for this. Max/Alec ftw! ;D
| Jenn chapter 10 . 2/26/2012
I read this story before, maybe a year ago or so. I remember crying at the end of this chapter back then, too. Once again I find myself with tears in my eyes, the idea of Max counting the seconds between Alex's gasping breaths, begging him to hold on for her, to fight... it is one of the most powerful images I have ever seen written. Truly amazing work.
| Diana chapter 8 . 12/20/2011
I think you could have written this story withou using Logan's character as a whipping post. Suddenly, all his talents, compassion and skills have disappeared and he can do no right.
While I prefer the Max/Alec relationship, all the Logan bashing ruins the story and makes it unrealistic plus it does a disservice to Max and Alec's characters since both have worked with Logan and been saved by Logan at one point.
To be honest, the way you've written it, Logan has every right to be pissed off or annoyed that Max has suddenly dropped him now that he's not useful to her or too 'human' to understand. It makes her goal to assimilate with the ordinaries a little weak and hypocritical.
Its a shame because you have enough talent that you didnt have to go down the Logan hate route. Relationships can end where there is still respect and care for a person. After all they've experienced, Max and Logan should be an example of that.
As it stands, an interesting story become distracting by an obvious dislike of Logan and what should read as Max's internal dialogue actually reads as the authors and that is always distracting.
/My honest opinion meant in the best way possible xx
| kikinette11 chapter 12 . 11/12/2011
very great story bravo
| ccase13 chapter 12 . 6/10/2011
I loved the way ALec's practicality propels him to the forefront of the Manticoran refugees leadership.
Logan is a caring and commited activist for the greater good but he lacks strategic talent. Its a miracle he was never caught as Eyes Only.
Alec's later Manticore training would make him a VASTLY better leader should he so choose.
Its really nice you letting us see him step up. Thanks for writing for us.
| Supernaturalloverja chapter 12 . 3/29/2011
I love your story!
Alec is sooo sweet! Poor baby!
| ZkKtTysoul chapter 12 . 1/14/2011
A fantastic story. The story idea was great. How you tried to find a solution to their problems. Having both Max injuried and Alec near death death making them realize what they can't lose worked well with the characters. Great work. I must read more of your work. Thanks!
| hpfan1987 chapter 12 . 1/8/2011
Love this story! you totally have them on character! Max and Alec are so amazing together!
| Caruka chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
I love the way that you point that Logan usually puts Max in dangerous position and paradoxically is Alec who stantds for her...