Reviews for Should Have Been
dreamer 3097 chapter 1 . 7/4
This is good
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
oh god, you must love breaking people's heart and trampling on their feels! but beautiful story nonetheless
Doni chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
Bittersweet. Very nicely done.
mjg021182 chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Interesting concept. I especially liked the subtle tie-in to Twilight as well, the "life for a life" thing...

Good job. Well done!

mj
cokeskb chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
Good Story. No less then what I would expect Tony to do. Thanks for sharing your talent.
enigma-kar chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
Wow, that was so moving! You had my crying there at one stage. Beautifully written and I loved the ending with Tony choosing to turn back time to save McGee. That was so sweet. :) Loved it, thank you

Kar, xx
Mokibobolink chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
Absolutely fantastic story. Truly brought tears to my eyes and I love that Tony was willing to risk his own life for McGee's. I don't think I'll ever be able to watch that ep again without thinking of this. Great work.

-Moki
Murgy31 chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
This was great too!
TaylorGibbs chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
Wow! That is just phenomenal.
EmeraldFire512 chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
aw, so sad ans sweet.
Dark Angel's Blue Fire chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
Loved the story it was great nice work!
crokettsgirl chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
I truly enjoyed this story. Not that Tim dies but that Tony with his true feelings decided to take Tim's place and will live and allow Tim to live...This was a great turn in a tag. You did great. Sue
Dreamer22 chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
aw! Tim! Tony! ::sniffs:: well done!
Deluded Visions chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
Great 'what if' and well written.

I'm satisfied with SWAK, it's one of my all-time favorite NCIS episodes and wouldn't change a thing however it makes for great fanfic!
lime juize chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
I LOVE it! It hurt to read but the ending made it all better! Thanks for sharing this story with us! *hugs you*
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