|Reviews for We Bullet The Words|
| The Puppeteer Master chapter 4 . 7/1/2010
| The Puppeteer Master chapter 3 . 7/1/2010
Yup Lavi refused,who wouldn't have?
| The Puppeteer Master chapter 2 . 7/1/2010
Love it i love bad Lavi.
| The Puppeteer Master chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Ahaha i like it.
| stoneygeek chapter 4 . 5/15/2009
Good one. This one is fun. Sorry, I'm tired and don't have much to say.
| Aion Laven Walker chapter 4 . 5/11/2009
Wow... great! XD
| Sazzypants chapter 4 . 5/11/2009
lolz THIS WAS AWSOME! XD i love the supernatural! 8D
ghost hunters is better than GHI, i think. XD
and i knew i recognized that bunny story from somewhere. XD;; i think they had it on Scary But True, also. XD
| DracoAries chapter 4 . 5/11/2009
O, that was awesome!
I have Lavi's view as well; I LOVE ghost (and the fortress where I live is haunted OwO)!
| ritachi chapter 3 . 11/22/2008
Well, that was...strangely abrupt, and you leave me once again clinging onto what I think. Was it good? Was it bad? Do I want to spill blood? (Dunno if you'd ask me THAT question, though.) The answers: I don't know. I think you have a talent for that sort of thing. You leave me standing right on the edge of good and bad, and I keep scratching my head thinking "I really don't know WHAT to think of this". First of all, it was VERY different from the other chapters. It was so starkly abstract. It was like your previous chapters were all colourful and whatnot (from what I can remember), and this chapter just felt like it was outlined in black on white and then you splashed black paint over it and the outlines of the picture turned to white.
This chapter wasn't remarkable, but your ideas are. Just like your previous update on the other story, you keep leaving me hanging wondering what could've happened to make your writing kinda...sadistic. Yeah, it does feel like it. It feels like you're kind of depressed, or either that, under stress and anxiety and it's seeping into your story (not that I mind ).
Being weird myself, I liked the last line no matter how abrupt it was. I found myself really liking this personification for Allen, and when you made Lavi go on that mission with Allen, I was thinking "It feels more fit for Kanda" but after I asked that in my head, you gave it a very suitable reason, and I was like "Wow, it felt like you just read my mind!"
Hm, yeah, to be honest, I have no idea what I'm talking about, but yeah, your writing has gotten strangely odder but I'm liking the eccentricities so I'm gonna stay on for the ride. Although I'd like to see a continuation of this story (I wouldn't mind if you didn't) and I'd like to see you proofread your work a bit more (methinks you don't proofread but skim).
Overall though, I think I have come to the consensus that I like this chapter and this particular one-shot. However, I really do wish you were a bit more descriptive on this one because it felt like a story where you REALLY had to bring out Lavi's observant side, and when Lavi's observant, he should be VERY descriptive. Well, that's just my opinion anyway.
Good job at delivering this very odd but VERY entertaining piece. I'd like to see you branching out to other genres and testing out your limits. It'd be VERY interesting, that's for sure. -
| jarofclay42 chapter 3 . 11/22/2008
Well, I was going to end the review there, but I thought I had never done such a short review so it unnerved me *_*
But I really don't know what to say XD I always feel unsure what to think when I read fics about Allen becoming the 14th..they're always mysterious and sad, and..and...
No, seriously, I can't find the words at all XD I'll just stop here, leaving you in confusion, muhaha.
I'll go read the third chapter of your other fics *runs away in a cloud of dust*
| Aion Laven Walker chapter 3 . 11/21/2008
Poor Allen and Lavi... T_T
Good job b
| SilentKiller1 chapter 3 . 11/21/2008
man i would freak
| SilentKiller1 chapter 2 . 11/21/2008
i would have backed out allen baka
| Error101 chapter 3 . 11/21/2008
Lol...I side with Lavi...
But good story keep writing & update soon!
| Kiminaru chapter 2 . 11/20/2008
hehehe...that was definitely amusing...