|Reviews for Art Model|
| NoLongerWritingFF chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
Wow! Hot! good! Icredible!
That sums it up! :)
| SallyThePumpkinQueen chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
i like it!
will you continue or was it just this chapter?
| sweetswirlypop chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
Oh fudge. That was just hot! And extremely good for your first lemon.
| Queen of Six chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
| dyingxlove636 chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
Great lemon... plz write more/ continue this story u've gotten me intreged in wanting to read more so plz continue ... i cant wait to read more if u do.. but if u dont ... i cant do anything about it but great story :)
| frequentlydazzeledbylit chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
holy shit girlly that was hot! loved it. that was wicked good for your first lemon... that means you have to WRITE MORE! :) hahaha
| limona chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
That was my all-caps contribution to your reviews.
This was some serious lemonade. I knew where it was going, and I loved every second of it.
| cullenitis chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
edward? art model? m...me likey! ;D
| LaTuaCantante86 chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
wow that was really good, and original.
i like the nicknames, little man and crayola.. lol!
oh and not to mention that was hot! you should make a story out of this, i think you could make it into a really great story ;)
| koukla4 chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
wow, that was...wow
| imthegreenfairy88 chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
my goodness! That was exceptionally good for your first "lemon" I'm very impressed. Very good, def liked it!
| birdee18 chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
WOW! You know I think this is all kinds of awesome! Bella. Edward. Nekkid. Best. Thing. Ever. Love the idea of the nude modeling. I freaking love how you write Bella's internal monologues. Sexin during a thunderstorm is so great. I love this but you know I love you even more!
| Citrus Fever chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
This story was so unique, it was an amazing read. Very HOT too ;). I really hope you write more like this. You're so flippin good at it! LOL :)
| flormi chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
best one shot ever!
| TheDeadliestSin chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
very creative :)