Reviews for The Prelude
SkyChild chapter 3 . 5/16/2010
Awwwh, the ending is so cute... THe story in itself was exactly how I pictured the two of them, if they ever decided to play with their cards open. Touching and wonderful. Great word!
Kelpie the Thundergod chapter 3 . 11/10/2008
so cute, really liked it!

the end is sweet too
Shunatsu chapter 3 . 11/7/2008
Aw, I loved the ending! This story wasn't bad, but the ending was really cute! Does daddy still loves mommy? Yes he does!
shokubu chapter 3 . 11/7/2008
well i do love how deep it go but sometimes i don't i don't know what i don't understand so i can really comment about it...

anyway i like the story...