|Reviews for Jasper's tempting snack!|
| PurpleOrchid85 chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
Overall great fic, but "Rosaline" is spelt "Rosalie", trust me, look in the book. Perhaps if you continue this, should get a Beta Reader to check over for spelling and general grammar.
I liked the plot and I agree, Bella is a tempting snack - to Jazz! lol.
| ruby chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
other than the little Rosaline slip up I've seen elsewhere. This was quiet good, I liked the way you showed Alice loving Jasper in spite of his downfalls. Lets see some more.
| NA chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
This is a good story, but the only thing that bothered me was 'Rosaline'. Her name is Rosalie.
| d chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
u make carlise so mean!
| Heroes.Heroines chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
wow. that was great! but id never thought carlisle would be that mean. i love jasper stories.
| XxRosalinexX chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
love the drama