Reviews for The Substitute |
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not a fan chapter 6 . 9/10 Very well written but unfinished, even if it was planned... it is considered unfinished... there is a lot of story missing... you have left too much out |
Guest chapter 6 . 3/2 Que lixo deprimente, simplesmente horrível em tudo, história deplorável e ridícula, perda de tempo total em ler uma porcaria dessas. |
peterco chapter 6 . 1/25 That was awesome and incredible, and very very sad That ending felt unnecessarily cruel. You could've had Garry rescued worth most people thinking he died in the maze, and it could still have been a proper tragic story |
Guest chapter 6 . 1/17 I liked the story though you could have included Sirius a bit more. |
H. Automata chapter 6 . 12/16/2023 Wow! Lovely fic! Harry's emotional distress and the support of his friends steadily pushing him back from the brink is really well-communicated, and the tragic, bitter-sweet ending pair really well with the overall story structure. TFTF |
Guest chapter 6 . 12/15/2023 That's heartbreaking |
NoLifeWithoutFanfiction chapter 6 . 12/15/2023 It is too early in the morning for me to be sobbing like a baby over a story. |
Jimbocous chapter 5 . 11/19/2023 Whew. Didn't see that coming. Thanks! Nice one. |
mrafricanzulu chapter 6 . 11/18/2023 Beautiful. |
Yourmumslover chapter 6 . 9/13/2023 This was shit |
arikipanda chapter 6 . 8/28/2023 Yessss! I love this story. What a wicked ending. No redemption. |
BlazeStryker chapter 6 . 7/30/2023 I hope magic itself dies; the sheep don't deserve any. |
isabellaevamara chapter 6 . 4/2/2023 Great story. Hope Hermione can forgive him and gets to see her harry again someday |
Guest chapter 6 . 2/1/2023 I hate that you did all this beautiful build-up, and then just... wasted it like this. More than half the wordcount of this stupid story deals with Harry regaining innate human respect, and then in the end you reveal that nothing at all changed, nothing is different, he just dies still believing himself to be lesser. This story would have been better if you'd abandoned it after chapter 5. |
MuggleMeatloaf chapter 6 . 1/26/2023 wow, this was so sad! |