|Reviews for Mistakes Happen|
| Motherof8 chapter 25 . 8/26/2014
| Motherof8 chapter 19 . 8/26/2014
Alice is so bossy
| Motherof8 chapter 18 . 8/26/2014
Wow, what a damaged pair!
| Motherof8 chapter 13 . 8/26/2014
As if he needed the rejection
| Motherof8 chapter 8 . 8/26/2014
| Motherof8 chapter 7 . 8/26/2014
| Strupps chapter 31 . 8/3/2010
This is so great. Please continue.
The sneak peek really made me want to know how the story continues and I really want to know what was going trough Edward's mind. Please continue writing. I already loved Mistakes happen and I think it's great for the story to continue. So please, please go on.
| Soph chapter 29 . 7/4/2010
really nice story, yo actually made me cry!
| Soph chapter 24 . 7/4/2010
first time i hate alice! shes sooooo nosey!
good story so far!
| Cheshiregrl chapter 31 . 6/28/2010
Hi, I thought that since the story was complete I should just do one general review? you said you wanted to know what to improve, but, since it's already finished...
Anyway, it was a really great story, really dramatic, yet I couldn't drop it.
I liked how, at first, I thought it was the same Mia, and also how, at some point Bella's thoughts make you think she actually canged much more into the things Lola throwed at her.
I also really had to wait to see how it was that Edward was the cause of his Mia's death...
I loved Edward and Mia's story, it was really sweet and a great way to show Edward's purest self (so to speak...) neither the party teen nor the haunted man...
One thing tough, Bella's Mia went away and never got to contact her? and what happened with the Emmett outburst at the hospital, he just cooled off? did Bella deattached herself from Jacob completly?
I think it's deffinetly worth waiting for the sequel, there's a lot to the story yet, I can feel...
I wish Bella didn't have to hurt Edward, but, then there wouldn't be a plot...though, Edward seemed really cautios in the past not to push or scare her,wouldn't have he been more cautios on his surprise, knowing how Bella is with attention, crowds, surprises and trust?
So I hope that's what you were looking for in a review, my likes and my questions...sorry it got so long...
Hope you are great and thank you for the story!
| The Future Mrs Pattinson chapter 31 . 10/13/2009
I think it would be great if you posted this sequal. I would definetly read it )
| The Future Mrs Pattinson chapter 29 . 10/13/2009
Great story! The whole thing is very well written and I really enjoyed reading it!
| Anna of Greece chapter 12 . 7/9/2009
| RingTheBella chapter 31 . 5/7/2009
I read this AN before reading the story and it looks like the sequel will be really good! I think I'll wait for the sequel to be up before reading the first story, that way I can read them back-to-back. Good luck with your writing, I'm looking forward to it.
| Catzrule chapter 14 . 5/4/2009
This chapter reminds me of the song torn.
and this is how I feel. I'm cold and I am shamed, lying naked on the floor, and you should never change, into something real, i'm wide awake and I can see the perfect sky is torn,your to late i'm already torn.
Not the exact lyrics but close enough.