|Reviews for Sins Of The Father|
| Mary chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
Star, yeah Jazz would have lived with Maddie…but she would be at least in her late twenties in this book.
I say Crystal should make more chapters…like from Jazz's pov where she can have a son named Luke Daniel Foley (bc Jazz and Tucker are totally perfect for each other) and Sam is godmother. Or Sam and Val are talking at a coffehouse, remembering Danny…the boy they'd both loved. Or Maddie, on the anniversary of Danny's death, leaving a rose at his grave. Maybe when Jazz is a psychologist she can specialize in abused teens because her dead brother had kinda been one. Anyone agree?
I'd write it myself btw but I don't have an account and computers confuse the crap out of me so I can't.
| CaptainThirsty1945 chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
Wow. Karma really bit Jack in the butt this time. Danny will never get to be the astronaut he dreamed to be. He'll never be able to marry Sam or start a family. And to think that's all Jack's fault. Harsh...
Good story! It's rather depressing, but that wa sthe point wasn't it? Hey what happened to Jazz? She would probably be living with Maddie right? Because her dad's in prison and her brother's dead...
Star Atomu Saturday
| danielle chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
AH DANNY DIED SON OF A FLIPPER! oh well good story!
| Donteatacowman chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
Wow. That's... terribly sad. Good job on it then, I guess.
*goes into a dark corner to brood*
| CandyCoatedChocolate chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
Oh my gosh...that was so sad...
| TangeloTime chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
the plot was good and there was a proper mood but that got killed when you spelled ceased as creased