|Reviews for Frontier: Unknown Battle|
| Broken Angel01 chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
That David. Truly evil he is. I like it! I'm so glad I said something because really I think you did a good job. You're great with battle scenes, that's for sure, which makes me kind of envious! As for your characters, we didn't see a lot of them here because it's a one-shot, but from what was there (and it was a lot packed into one short story) I think they do have the makings to be really great OC characters, those kind that I was talking about earlier that can really catch a reader's eye.
| Yami-Tenshi-Hime-Of-Shoushins chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
wow nicely writen