Reviews for Better Woman
MKY8 chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
And, this bittersweet story was so good, it was like a balsam, thank you.
ancientesha chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
Her eyes slid shut for a moment, then opened again with a heated gaze. "Looks like the better woman didn't win after all.

His own lips turned up in a soft smile. "You're wrong," he told her, bending down to kiss her. "She did."

Brilliant line!

And I do love your writing!
OncomingBadWolf chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
Ah, yes! I've read the other one, and this is a fantastic follow up. I'd like to think it actually happened in the episode... maybe... perhaps... in my head at the very least...

"I do care for you, Reinette. I do, but it's only been a few hours since I first met you and you were a child then."

I think Moffat really needs to take a look at that sentence. I can understand why Reinette fell for him, but not why he fell for her in a few hours. Espeacially after what he said to Rose the episode before... Not that I have anything against Reinette as a perseon.

Anyway, that was something you probably didn't need to know... so this is well written, and well done. Brillant.