|Reviews for Overcoat|
| ExAmoreDolorem chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
I would love to read more of this!
| I am Katniss Everdeen chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
I think this was a very interesting story, I know I suure liked it. The plot could have used a little more detail, but I really like the way you write, I enjoy your style. Keep writing whatever you wish, you're very good.
| Pechay chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
What the fuck did I just read?
DAFUQ IS GOING ON WITH SNAPE AND HERMIONE?
WHEN DID THIS HAPPEN?
I WAS OKAY WHEN IT WAS FRED, BUT SNAPE? 40-year old SNIVELLUS?
IT MADE ME FUCKING LAUGH LIKE A RETARD INFRONT OF MY RELATIVES...
But all around nice story...
|Alexa1993 chapter 1 . 4/17/2011|
| ShockTreatment08 chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
Damn... that was intense!
| Amber-Jade James chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
good storie! enjoyed the read!
| sjrodgers23 chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
loved the oneshot more of them please thank you keep them coming
| AlyssaRosey chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
Its too good lol... Too short though ;)...
| PirateQueen91 chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
Well done. Some people have trouble using strange, but ordinaryobjects into their fanfiction. I like the idea of the trenchcoat! That was ingenious. Keep up the good work, and maybe even write some more.
| mijbel chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
Story is great ,how about a dictionary?
| Sevspet chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
Thank you for sharing this story. You've got a gift, great descriptions, I love the dialog because they aren't overly chatty - it's just the right amount. You convey their thoughts well. I hope you don't mind me pointing out in the last paragraph you've written, "She couldn't speak anymore, and neither could her,..." I think you mean..and neither could he. Again, thank you for this lovely treat, I really did enjoy it and hope you consider adding more or writing more stories because I'll be looking for them.
| severuswife chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
Story was great!So much passion and romance! I loved it! Absolutely terrific! Have you wrote any longer ones? lol
| laurensav765 chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
Wow wow wow
that was brilliant...
but what was severus purpose on being there? did he have lacy inderwear on is well lol
| Megan Consoer chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
| Me14 chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
nice one shot! it was very descriptive, i enjoyed it alot. good writing.