|Reviews for Only Children|
| Inkfire chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
It's so beautiful!
| Expecting Rain chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
This is a really interesting take on a Death Eater relationship, and very well written! I see that you've written more of this pairing but unfortunately I have a block where I can't get into first-person fanfiction written for third-person fiction, and vise versa. But I think the relationship you've come up with is very interesting! If you write more third-person fanfiction about them I'll definitely check it out.
| xDoubleIndemnity chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
Oh, let me just say that I will never be able to look at Alecto, Antonin, or Alecto/Antonin the same again. Not in a bad way, i mean. But is not that good because I had my own interpretation in my head for my fic, and this just completely changed it. Oh well, it was worth it. ] I like your description of the setting and appearances of the characters - detailed enough to give me a good idea of it, but not too detailed that it hurts my head to comprehend. Anyways, i love how it explores Alecto at three different ages, with enough difference in her thoughts to reflect that even though she's changing, she's still Alecto. (Does any part of this review not make sense? I'm typing in a hurry and i don't want to reread it. I'm going to go watch American Idol in a bit and work on hw...) WHY do i keep going off topic? Ugh. ANYWAYS, i'll go check on more of your stuff over the weekend, probably. Loves. -xDoubleIndemnity
| Shadow Padawan chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
wow...this is awesome...
The last line almost made me cry...
| Xx starlight-moon xX chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
ah! i saw this while i was doing my hair and HAD to read it too!i really need to stop!
poor alecto, but poor antonin too. they're still victims of other peoples mistakes as much as their own, in the end. and dammit, child dolohov is just as disarmingly cute as the child carrows were! even more disturbingly, teenage, abusive dolohov is strangely cute too
anyway...now i really AM headed out!
chinks vodka glass
| FirstYear chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
quite powerful.. it would have been easy to over do this but I enjoyed the understated tone... nicely done.
| Jacalyn Hyde chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
I like your other Antonin better obviously and Alecto seems about the same though more mature, perhaps. But this is a great story and you've made some very powerful points here. Especially because her love isn't entirely unrequited but still so complicated. Seeing their relationship progress was interesting, and while they have been exposed to a lot and seem very mature, both at least act their ages for the most part. I love this pairing, you always do so well with it. Keep writing. -Lia.