Reviews for Pain of Betrayal
Galwan chapter 1 . 6/6/2015
That's it? Where's the rest of the story?
Danielle May-Song Harkness chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
Nice love the poem
Pentagraham-crackers chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
YAY! i've seen fics similar to this before but they make Iruka evil. I like how you made him support naruto. You should do something to continue it or do a similar plot because this is really good:)
SkySwimmer19 chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
Great job!

Megaman88 chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Come on man keep writing chapters to this! It's good!
Moonlight Harmony chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
hi! i cant wait for the next instalment! i hope to read it sometime.


moonlight harmony.
917brat chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
did naruto kill himself
elisalove chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
omg i just found this story and it is hot plz dont abandon it plz update!
Heroes Tale chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
great. This is good
shadowelf144 chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Ellory chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
That was very interesting. I liked the poem a lot. Good work, hun!

dragonheart967 chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
I kind of like this fanfic. Shows sarow and what Naruto's true worth to the people are. I think that it would be good if you had a story going to show whats the after math. But I really like this story.
The Elemental Dragon Emperor chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
Its very good and its sad as well i hope to see more
90MLLu chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
So touching. Very well written. It has so much emotions in it. I feel bad for Naruto. I like Iruka in this Fanfic. He acts like a true friend

Your little poem brought this story to another level. It made it sadder to read this.

You have done an amazing job!(v)
1-2 Chance chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
Then I shall make your life all the better and leave this...

The poem was AMAZING! And so was the rest of this chapter, you were able to really make it believable and also I think that if you plan to continue this then you'll have a great story! But if it's just a one-shot then it's still amazing.

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