Reviews for A Beautiful Palace to Get Lost In
Guest chapter 9 . 12/11
P-please continue this story...!
Guest chapter 9 . 8/15
so wheres the next chapter ?
Guest chapter 9 . 5/30
I love it. I hope you someday continue writing it.
Mizuki Rakuen chapter 9 . 8/8/2016
Esto esta tan intenso por favor espero el proximo capitulo.
Kyshin25 chapter 9 . 2/19/2016
Hey everyone who has read or reviewed this story! I just wanted to announce that I have revived the story and it is now on my new page Kyshin25 (I will be changing my name later)! All of the chapters are included and have been posted as of today and Chapter 10 is there as well! I am working on 11 and 12 as I type this!

Thanks so much for the love and support throughout the years!
John chapter 9 . 12/15/2015
Great story want to read more
Eeveesloveyugioh chapter 4 . 4/14/2015
THIS CHAPTER IS SO SHORT. But, I still love it! The end. Wait, that wasn't a story! Anyways, I love this story and keep writing!

- Eeveesloveyugioh
Eeveesloveyugioh chapter 3 . 4/14/2015
Lol. So, why did Mana chicken out? I mean, Atem was asleep, and she was so close! So, I'd love if this chapter got just one more chapter if this isn't complete, but I don't know if it's complete since I didn't really bother to check... So yeah. See you later!

- Eeveesloveyugioh
Eeveesloveyugioh chapter 2 . 4/10/2015
I've heard of Asiera! I sent her a private message once! So, I love your story! I know that you probably get that every day, but I truly mean it.
Eeveesloveyugioh chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
hmk118 chapter 9 . 12/7/2014
your writing is so good! please continue with this story it's really good!
Akina Anev chapter 9 . 11/19/2014
excellent! please please keep going I really NEEED to read the rest!
Guest chapter 9 . 6/9/2013
when r u giving the next chapter it is already 2013!
QueenofRhymes chapter 9 . 5/31/2013
Please make more! I want to know what happens next
The Raven chapter 6 . 5/25/2013
Are u sure that u aren't Ra writing this himself?
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