Reviews for End of the Line
Daniel Benfield chapter 2 . 12/3/2008
Intriguing so far...but a "K" rating is not-so-good for an instance of the word "ass" - anyway, if you ever need people for the edge of the Universe you can use mine for whatever you want (my author page has a link to a list).

Personally, I thought the conductor was described akin to the First, Second, or Seventh Doctor (from "Doctor Who").

Finally, whenever you have the time to, check out my stories and let me know what you think. I'll be checking up on this one!

-Daniel
Subterranean Renaissance Faire chapter 2 . 11/29/2008
The edge of the universe, huh? Reminds me fondly of Night on the Galactic Railroad.

Keep writing!

~'Dux
Gamer chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
this is mighty intetresting I'll be sure to check in on this
Subterranean Renaissance Faire chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
Wow. This looks like it'll be interesting.

It's slightly confusing, as it seems to jump from one place to another. (and KaorinxKonata? That's unexpected. O.o )

Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.

~'Dux