Nice story, although many mistakes are there. But the storyline is interesting.

Nicely done!

Wonderful story. I liked bringing the magical history and the families as a major part. I know it is many years old and future material is unlikely. I will hope.

A very fun story to read. Thank you for the work you put into it.
I'm sad to see that the muse has left you, but again thanks for the fun story.

Well, I can see why you abandoned this. This story is trash, and about as brain dead as I assume you are. Good riddance, monkey.

I hate to say this, but your Latin is lousy. Your "Potter Family Motto" actually translates to ""lineage is completely different".
"Family Above All Else" is actually translated thus:"Familia Super Omnia Aliud".
I took four years of Latin in college. It was not required, but I do love the language.

I enjoyed your story. I’m sorry it wasn’t finished. But it looks like you’ve surprised by reappearing before. (Hint, hint.)

agatha? really? why change peoples names unnecessarily? its augusta

Clan potter? Where the hell did clan come from?

Didn't Sirius already reinstate Andromeda?

10 years and no update I think I'm going to cry. No sarcasm I get so frustrated that some great fix never get finished

please update immediately

please update immediately

Just a query. Since it's over nine years since the last update I'm curious as to whether the author has died? Cocked up one's toes? Shuffled off this mortal coil?
If so, one has been remiss in not submitting notification of this error, in triplicate of course.
Should this not be the case, the gap between chapters seems to be... excessive.

So Harry is going to have Daphne, Tracey, and a few more!