|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament|
| Cateagle chapter 5 . 5/26/2009
Well, that chapter was well worth the wait and now we see a bit more of Dumbles' manipulations. I do hope Alexian is able to assist Harry enough to avoid Dumbles' various stratgems and manipulations. 'Twill be interesting to see how many of his proxy's votes Harry reverses, if he can. Meanwhile, meeting up and connecting with the rest of his family should be fascinating and adventuresome since Dumbles will undoubtedly try to stop him and he still has Tommy-boy to deal with.
| Holen-Snape chapter 5 . 5/26/2009
I love the update. So what will happen next? Will Umbridge still be the teacher for DADA this year? Will she still harm Harry with the blood quill? Why did Harry hide Mr Malfoy's involvement with Voldypoo? Looking forward to the next chapter. thank you
| Lord Black79 chapter 5 . 5/26/2009
It's good to see this story going again. Great chapter, can't wait for the next one. Again thanks again for posting a new chapter.
| CelticGoddess09 chapter 5 . 5/26/2009
Hello. I just wanted to say that I really like this story! It seems to be a fresh take on political Harry. I especially like his political connections in the Muggle world, and how memory charms are the reason that Sirius and Remus haven't mentioned stuff to Harry.
I do have a couple things to comment on however. I noticed that you didn't refer to Alexian by his name until the fifth chapter, and that you didn't really ever show the scene when Harry finds out about Alexian. It made me, as a reader, a little bit confused, because we never really see the transition from the clueless Harry at the end of GoF to the political savvy Harry during the story. I can understand having the thing about Alexian be a mystery at first, but you seem to mention revelations as if they were common knowledge, sorta. It leaves the reader feeling a bit confused, as if they were left out of the loop.
But other than that, I think you have a very interesting story and I look forward to reading more!
| zoey zink chapter 5 . 5/26/2009
yay! thanks for updating! this was such a sad chapter with all the wills and stuff. is daphne going to be in the next chapter? please?
| lordamnesia chapter 5 . 5/26/2009
Awesome new chapter! I hope he finds his Godsister soon! Keep up the great work!
| Rydrian Gunn the Journeyman chapter 5 . 5/26/2009
good chapter liked the godsister idea is it hermione because that is who I think it is
| Knives91 chapter 5 . 5/26/2009
Most excellent work. Pray continue.
| shiftyless chapter 5 . 5/26/2009
Me thinks this is so very like awesome chapter, everything's written & described damn bleedin' well.
I just can't say I like 1 think since I like the whole chapter, the length of this here chapter is goodl as well
You deserve 6 Chocolate Frogs you do & a plate of cookies
| Xemnas Swan chapter 5 . 5/26/2009
| Canuto-90 chapter 5 . 5/26/2009
Great ff! I can't wait for the next update.
Greatings from Argentina,
| Teufel1987 chapter 5 . 5/26/2009
Intriguing ... It seems that Lucius Malfoy is on Harry's side from chapter 3 ... I just came across your story and must say that I quite like it!
So, I have a few questions ...
1. Now that Harry has shown them the memory of Voldemort's return, is the ministry going to acknowledge it?
2. Will Harry be able to use the official Potter will to free Sirius (cause the truth was written in the will)
3. Is Dumbledore still using Harry's money? If so, then how come Harry didn't find out when he talked to the goblins?
4. Where is Hermione in on this? She seems to be in Harry's corner at times but at other times, acts quite snobbish ...
5. Where is Lucius in on this? He seems to be in Harry's corner and they seem to have an understanding ... Has he changed sides? If so, why? Because he seems to be rather set in his views, if you get my drift
6. Oh, and are you still looking for a second Beta? I could help ... I don't have a beta profile, but I am rather good in English and would love to work with you
Its good to see that you haven't abandoned this!
Hoping to hear from you soon!
| Firehedgehog chapter 5 . 5/26/2009
wow.. kick butt updates
| Rainbow2007 chapter 5 . 5/26/2009
i love it