Reviews for Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
Soki711 chapter 4 . 2/15/2009
You've made Harry into a snob and worst a boring snob. You need to add a little excitement, angst, jealously, action or this story will start to suck big time. Also the way your setting up the romance is platonic at best and boring at the worst. regards Kyoshi
Amylin Christin chapter 4 . 2/12/2009
I enjoy your ff. Not all Manipulative Dumbledore ffs are good, but yours is great.

I hope that I am right that the future paring will be Harry & Daphne? I started reading this paaring since a few days and I love it.

Please contune soon

Amy
TxA-GunFighter chapter 4 . 2/11/2009
Very good chapter.

gunny
Lucinda chapter 4 . 2/10/2009
very interesting - and that is a different way for Harry to learn about his family and responsibilities.

A bit sad to see yet another manipulative and not so nice Dumbledore, but that is fairly accurate to what JKR wrote, so what else can we do? I do like (if that's the best word) the fact that in your story, Dumbledore's manipulations aren't just aimed at the Potter family's wealth, resources and influence, but also go against other families. It seems a bit more balanced and realistic that way, though still quite sad and shameful.

I look forward to seeing what happens next.
StefanInVienna chapter 4 . 2/10/2009
good story. can't wait for the next chapter.
Ascended Paladin chapter 4 . 2/9/2009
Love the story and can't wait to see what else you have in store for us. Keep up the great work .
angelkitty77 chapter 4 . 2/6/2009
oh man this is so awesome i love how harry is in it, and i cant belive how no one thought to look into the wills but i guess that bumbledork made everyone think he is good. i cant wait to see what happens to hime next
karlii chapter 4 . 2/6/2009
What a great story! :-)

I LOVE all the details about the Wizarding World! You are doing a wonderful job explaining all the nuances.

Keep up the good work!
bemeka chapter 4 . 2/6/2009
I like this. The character portrayals are most intriguing. Looking forward to more
serious.effort chapter 4 . 2/6/2009
Great work. :) Thank you for writing and I look forward to reading more.
Kaylen Cooper chapter 4 . 2/5/2009
I find this interesting, and look forward to reading more. :)
magiquill9 chapter 4 . 2/4/2009
interesting premise. i like how you spun it. i look forward to more.
zarkan chapter 4 . 2/4/2009
Not bad it is a very good story and I hope that the headmaster recieves whta he deserves so update soon I want more see ya.
Steve Jester chapter 4 . 2/2/2009
Well, this is an extremely well written piece. A lot like my "Royal Prerogative" without the influence of The Crown. Will read more when posted.

Steve Jester
Ciroth chapter 4 . 2/1/2009
This is great so far. I hope to see more really soon!
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