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| Mako-clb chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
The overall feeling of the fic was a bit more somber than Natsumi is usually, but it works well here. My only complaint was that in the fifth paragraph, you lose the simple yet effective imagery of the earlier paragraphs. It isn't bad, but it does break the flow a bit.
| Ominae chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
Nice. Haven't read Natsumi/Shoji fics yet, but this one's good.