Why would I want to read a "teary and heart breaking" oneshot? At least he doesn't rape her in this piece of crap.

Sad how can u write this how do u sleep night?

if that ending scene had been longer...i would have been crying. very well written and emotional story. I would have loved for it to be longer, but im not sure how that would have happened.

Beautiful and heart-breaking

beautiful!

WOW! That was AMAZING! Ttly unexpected! Don't get me wrong.. bt I loved that ending!

Oh my god, wow... i love this...

its so sad and cute

~Alexandria Black~

wow. I absolutely love this piece, it did jerk a few tears..

wow.. did not expect that but it's very powerfull. i was happy, sad and shocked all at once. amazing.

For your first attempt at a one shot, you pack a punch! Poor Severus is never lucky in love. But then again, life is not full of happy endings. Nice job.

Oh my gosh... there is an anguish in this fic. The pain. The feeling. Freaking shit. I was sobbing by the end.

And that letter... ohh, that letter.

When I saw the title I was expecting a totally different path, but anyway, very sad and very beautiful.

Nicely written. :)

Keep up the amazing work... :)

Oh wow. I was looking for a quick happy fic but found something different.

This was amazingly moving to me and think it is an excellant one shot.

I love your writing :)

Oh...

wow...

it was well written, but can you write happy ones please! they cheer me up!

hehehehe!

That was so sad and beautiful all at the same time. :(