|Reviews for Fullmetal Pedigree!|
| HeroSeekerFrost chapter 10 . 6/30
Aw, seems this story won't be getting updated any time soon, but that's okay. Great story, I loved it! It was fun to read :). I really wanted Ed and Al to get caught though xD
| HeroSeekerFrost chapter 9 . 6/30
Whhhhhhaaaaaat? I may not like jewelry but still! I know enough to know it has nothing to dl with shiny-ness. Guys can be so dumb... girls can too I suppose, but right now... Nice chapter :D
| HeroSeekerFrost chapter 6 . 6/30
Honestly I watched two episodes and realized that despite what she seems like on the surface, Haruhi is decidedly NOT normal, AT ALL. She takes the weirdest things as completely ordinary! Anyways... good chapter :D
| HeroSeekerFrost chapter 5 . 6/30
Well you still could be anorexic but you didn't really say anything that would lead me to that conclusion. I actually have a small appetite as well, plus for whatever weird reason I never get hungry. What I mean by that is that the only sign I'll get if I accidentally starve myself or something is I'll notice my hands getting shaky and weak... basically I have to be extremely careful to eat properly.
Anyways! On to the actual story review for this chapter, poor Tamaki doesn't realize that in not telling Haruhi that he'd seen Al he ended up putting Haruhi and Ed together xD. Poor Al... but honestly, how did he think eating that many sweets would end well for him? Plus, they were probably incredibly rich which wouldn't help his weak stomach. Well, I'm gonna wrap this up 'cause I want to continue reading!
| HeroSeekerFrost chapter 4 . 6/30
I think I have a shag rug in my basement bathroom... my cats kinda tore it up a little bit though... anyways! Al and Ed housing with Tamaki? Interesting...
| angiewan601 chapter 1 . 5/12
| Xyzah chapter 3 . 2/2
JUST A REVIEW DONT GET MAD but I would just like to say that I dislike how you portray Ed as a bully... bacause thats wha it feels like... makes meh crei
| JamiiStar chapter 10 . 7/30/2015
Came back after three years and I still love the crap outta this story! I do hope you'll continue this sometime soon! You're a lovely writer and I look forward to more of your work! :D
| midnighthoshiko chapter 10 . 4/20/2015
This is really good and I really want to know what is going to happen next. Please update!
| Animechick1516 chapter 10 . 2/22/2015
why havent yiu updated sense 2012? its alreafy 2015... i like this story and want to see it continue...
| tenaciousToxophilite chapter 10 . 10/9/2014
LOL THE FOURTH WALL HAS BEEN COMPLETELY SHATTERED LIKE 5 TIMES XD
THIS IS REALLY GOOD
PUT IN SOME ANGST NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE
GOD HARUHI IS SO NICE NOT EVEN QUESTIONING HIS AUTOMAIL
ALSO NO LOVE TRIANGLE (ED AND HARUHI ARE JUST FRIENDS) AND I LIKE THE CREEPY ED STALKER
CAPS LOCK IS FABULOUS
| Guest chapter 10 . 9/21/2014
"Tamaki was quickly becoming Tamaki's second best friend."
Me: He must be very eager to make new friends…
Love this fanfic by the way, update soon!
| doodlemeow chapter 10 . 7/20/2014
Don't cut ed 's hair too! When is haruhi going to mention ed 's automail? What would happen if ed 's automail broke? Who would fix it? Would it be fixed? Or would he end up having to live with one arm?
| xxSnowxxAngelxx chapter 10 . 6/15/2014
I can see Al not being attached to his hair, but I hope you don't have Edward cut his! It's a part of him, like his automail limbs are, and he looks good with the long hair! Shorter hair suits Alphonse, but it would be weird for Ed to suddenly have short hair. It's like... Kanda with short hair weird.
OOOOOooh, you go on Gaia too? Could we talk there some? If you want to look me up, I'm Rogue Storm Astarael!
I have a question[or two or five... lol] : Can Ed and Al still do alchemy? Will they be using it at all if they can? Is Edward going to be in a relationship with anyone? (this is prompted by the two characters u listed, making me wonder if it's a TamakixEdward fic, though Tamaki likes Haruhi already)
-I think that that's enough questions for now. I love this story so far and look forward to reading more of it. Wonder who will discover his auto-mail limbs next... *muses to herself*
| Guest chapter 7 . 3/16/2014
LOL! 'I miss her... Translation: he slept with her'