Reviews for Her Kingdom as Great
RatherFabulous chapter 1 . 6/25
It's still a great story, lovely prose, well written (although it could use a bit tighter proof-reading), but it needs an epilogue or denouement.
It somehow just...stops. It isn't complete.
stuckunderwater chapter 2 . 2/23
This is fantastic
Guest chapter 1 . 2/16
I just wanted to thank you for sharing such a lovely work of art. This was simply a joy to read and a pleasure to daydream about. Wishing you the very best in all your endeavors.
RatherFabulous chapter 2 . 1/19
Really splendid prose.
Finding something on this site written with care and coherency is a marvel.
Thank you.
ShadoMarked chapter 1 . 12/11/2016
I have read and reread this story so many times! Absolutely just love it!
Rika chapter 2 . 11/9/2016
HOLY CRAP THAT WAS FREAKING FANTASTIC. IT WAS SO PERFECT IN EVERY LITTLE DETAIL OMG JUST..WOW WOW WOW OMG I'M BLOWN AWAY BEST LABYRINTH FANFIC I'VE EVER READ
PenArt chapter 2 . 7/21/2016
I liked your story, it was good :D
Liantei chapter 2 . 6/26/2016
This is without a doubt the greatest Labyrinth fanfic I have ever read! I love how you delved into the more metaphysical and magical aspects of that universe and made it so engaging and entertaining! I'm so glad I found this fic! You're a fantastic writer!
hearagain chapter 2 . 6/26/2016
This was lovely. I enjoyed the first chapter so much I was almost afraid to read the second for fear that it wouldn't live up to my expectations. After a little while, I took the chance to hit next and am very glad that I did. I enjoyed your story. Thanks for sharing.
laelruin chapter 2 . 3/5/2016
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWE! That was adorable! *hearts in eyes*
Thank you so much for writing and posting this!
L
ElementalFoxGoddess chapter 2 . 1/31/2016
Update soon ne?!
mickeydawn995 chapter 2 . 1/26/2016
Wow. Your world building is amazing. And I LOOOOVE your explanation of what Jareth is. I think the whole lesser goblin, goblin, and high goblin makes the most sense out of all the fics I've ever read. He's like a sun, the goblins are stars and the lesser goblins are like little rambunctious plants that live off their light. Soooo cool.
Lorca chapter 2 . 12/21/2015
I know this is an old story, but I kind of wish you would add a bit more to it.
Scarlett Foxie chapter 2 . 12/19/2015
I loved this. Thank you for posting.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/12/2015
This is awesome! Please, please continue! I would love to see how the Land of Near Endless Plains evolves! I have so many questions! How will the captured fae evolve? Will Toby inherit? Do the Plains hold any other secrets? Will the Aboveground/human world develop myths about Sarah and her kingdom? I really hope you grace us with another chapter!
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