|Reviews for Her Kingdom as Great|
| Brown hair and eyes chapter 3 . 12/16
This story is magical :)
| Zatara1324 chapter 3 . 12/13
Damn this is such a good story! Not sure if you're planning more or done, but either way it was truly excellent! So creative! Thank you!
| Stratagemini chapter 3 . 12/12
This was an amazing chapter. Well worth waiting for (though of course I wouldn't mind not waiting). Hearing sarah's story is always wonderful, and your descriptions make her kingdom seem otherworldly and elaborate. I can almost picture the kingdom of endless plains in my head as I read. The wedding sounded beautiful as well.
| 777angeloflove chapter 3 . 12/11
KYA! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! I'M SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED!
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/11
This is one of my favorite Labyrinth stories ever so I was really happy to see an update :)
I love your worldbuilding :)
| ShadoMarked chapter 3 . 12/11
Oh my gosh! And update! Loved it! I did notice so e switching between Robert and Richard as the father's name. Either way, it was splendid! Will there be more? This is seriously a favorite story. I have rad and reread I don't know how many times!
| Rune Tobor chapter 3 . 12/11
Sarah IS Queen
And finally married to her Partner
It is fitting he is also a King.
They got married and lived happily ever after
A traditional ending
Traditional because it is a good ending.
While you have a great story and it is complete, some extra scenes would be nice.
National Intelligence Department, NID, the Air Force is mentioned as well.
Is Sarah involved with Stargate Command?
A few scenes showing Sarah negotiating between the SGC or SG1 and the Tokra might be fun.
First comes love, then comes marriage, now it is time for the baby carriage.
Twins I think, a boy and a girl, one to be future Goblin King, another to be Queen of the N.E.P.
(Near endless plains)
Thanks for your time and effort writing and posting this story.
Please consider adding details to your world.
| Melissa45 chapter 3 . 12/11
Hooray an update! I like how you blended in The Ambassador. Were those Tok'ra who attended with the military? Cool!
| MPPC chapter 3 . 12/11
The world building and Sarah understanding from Karen's point of view really showcases the goals your note indicated. Wonderfully done.
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/11
A wonderful addition to a wonderful story. I certainly wasn't expecting more to this story, but this fits in perfectly and gives us a unique perspective on Sarah while also letting us see Sarah and Jareth's wedding.
| Linnorria chapter 3 . 12/11
Wow. I am super excited to read this. I really appreciate how Karen obviously has some ideas about what is going on but nothing definite and is treating it all as confidential. She's not stupid but also is respecting Sarah's separate life. I love how you wrote that relationship. Also hearing about the wedding was lovely. This is one of my favorite fanfiction out of thousands so more of it was so nice to read! Thank you!
| bhut chapter 3 . 12/11
This was a seriously awesome story. Thanks for sharing.
| Evelyna1 chapter 3 . 12/11
Oh. Oh wow. That is just absolutely, wonderfully overwhelming. And I love the mentioned crossovers!
The ambassador is of course obvious, but is Toby actually attending hogwarts? (aaand does that refer to tardisistheonlywaytotravel's I carry the crown?)
Either way, I love it!
| Honoria Granger chapter 3 . 12/11
Absolutely delightful and so unusual. Really well done. Please consider a sequel. I do love those coats!
| Zombie Reine chapter 3 . 12/10
*screeching noise* An update! I absolutely loved this fanfiction, rereading it multiple times, and then one day. . . A beautiful update that wrapped up loose ends quite nicely in an interesting third party view. I'm so happy right now. Thank you, and if you ever make a sequel, I would read it.