|Reviews for Her Kingdom as Great|
| RatherFabulous chapter 1 . 6/25
It's still a great story, lovely prose, well written (although it could use a bit tighter proof-reading), but it needs an epilogue or denouement.
It somehow just...stops. It isn't complete.
| stuckunderwater chapter 2 . 2/23
This is fantastic
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/16
I just wanted to thank you for sharing such a lovely work of art. This was simply a joy to read and a pleasure to daydream about. Wishing you the very best in all your endeavors.
| RatherFabulous chapter 2 . 1/19
Really splendid prose.
Finding something on this site written with care and coherency is a marvel.
| ShadoMarked chapter 1 . 12/11/2016
I have read and reread this story so many times! Absolutely just love it!
| Rika chapter 2 . 11/9/2016
HOLY CRAP THAT WAS FREAKING FANTASTIC. IT WAS SO PERFECT IN EVERY LITTLE DETAIL OMG JUST..WOW WOW WOW OMG I'M BLOWN AWAY BEST LABYRINTH FANFIC I'VE EVER READ
| PenArt chapter 2 . 7/21/2016
I liked your story, it was good :D
| Liantei chapter 2 . 6/26/2016
This is without a doubt the greatest Labyrinth fanfic I have ever read! I love how you delved into the more metaphysical and magical aspects of that universe and made it so engaging and entertaining! I'm so glad I found this fic! You're a fantastic writer!
| hearagain chapter 2 . 6/26/2016
This was lovely. I enjoyed the first chapter so much I was almost afraid to read the second for fear that it wouldn't live up to my expectations. After a little while, I took the chance to hit next and am very glad that I did. I enjoyed your story. Thanks for sharing.
| laelruin chapter 2 . 3/5/2016
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWE! That was adorable! *hearts in eyes*
Thank you so much for writing and posting this!
| ElementalFoxGoddess chapter 2 . 1/31/2016
Update soon ne?!
| mickeydawn995 chapter 2 . 1/26/2016
Wow. Your world building is amazing. And I LOOOOVE your explanation of what Jareth is. I think the whole lesser goblin, goblin, and high goblin makes the most sense out of all the fics I've ever read. He's like a sun, the goblins are stars and the lesser goblins are like little rambunctious plants that live off their light. Soooo cool.
| Lorca chapter 2 . 12/21/2015
I know this is an old story, but I kind of wish you would add a bit more to it.
| Scarlett Foxie chapter 2 . 12/19/2015
I loved this. Thank you for posting.
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/12/2015
This is awesome! Please, please continue! I would love to see how the Land of Near Endless Plains evolves! I have so many questions! How will the captured fae evolve? Will Toby inherit? Do the Plains hold any other secrets? Will the Aboveground/human world develop myths about Sarah and her kingdom? I really hope you grace us with another chapter!