This was delightful, and would, I imagine, well bear the weight of another few chapters if you chose to add them to its burden. Thank you.

This was very well constructed story... truly.

I love Jareth/Sarah, but even I must admit that she was far, far too young for him when she became a runner. But that's why I can forgive her choice to leave, she had time to grow up. This story was a perfect example of her coming into her own power and growing as a person to a point where she is equal to the King of Goblins.

And her kingdom really had the most interesting details that I didn't at all fail to appreciate. I like how she became a queen before coming to openly accept Jareth.

I'm so speechless right now I can't think what to say in this review. But it's good speechless.

I'll review better when I read the next chapter... hopefully.

i cant remember how many times i have read this story but each time i read it im completly engrosed in it and at the end im left wanting more. i must congratulate you on such a great story.

I absolutely adore this story. I first read it a couple of years ago, and end up re-reading it every 6 months or so. It's beautifully written, with excellent characterization. You somehow manage to tie the story up well, while still leaving the reader wishing for more. This is my favorite piece of fanfiction ever.

Oh my goodness, I cannot believe this doesn't have thousands of reviews.

This is, quite simply, one of the best fandom stories I have ever read. I'm talking past the Potter, Who, Bones, Gone with the Wind, Austen, North & South, Buffy and all else that I love to read ... I love this. I love the crafting, and the ... _profound_ feeling you give to this story. I loved it all.

I loved Jareth's calm demeanor, yet vibrant, full personality. Movie!Jareth and MarbleGlove!Jareth are synonymous, except yours has a depth that film can only wish to achieve. I really truly loved this story. I know I'll be back to reread it. *love*

wow this is a great start to a story.

Bravo BRavo! Forget another story, youre my favorite now! This piece was beautiful original mature and creative. I LOVE it! *squeal*

WOW! Original and I LOVE it! Another one of your stories on my favorite list and I think I'll just add you!

I love this! I haven't seen anybody else explore the implications of that line. I love the descriptions of Sarah's Kingdom and of Jareth's power/backstory. Sequel, yes?

Wow, this story is so beautiful and detailed. I like the way you expanding the universe. But what I love the most is your theory, about Fae, Goblin hierarchy, and the reason you give about how Sarah defeat Jareth with "You have no power over me!" line (Seriously, I had been curious until now how the Goblin KING can be defeated by such a sentence). Your explanation is almost canon to me XD. And Sarah as the Queen of her very own realm is a very good future for her (I just can't bear the thought that Sarah would live a normal life forever after her very magical adventure. I mean, that's so vain XD)

Overall, your story is an instant fave to me, and now I'm going to read your other fic. But I'm curious, when Sarah and Jareth married, did Sarah's kingdom will merge with Jareth's or still had it's own realm?

I love this story. It's such a fresh and unique take on Labyrinth. Bravo! Wonderful, wonderful work.

very cute! great job!

That is one of the most well thought out, enjoyable Labyrinth stories I have ever read. The characters stay rather true to themselves, so everything flows and is beleivable. I give you a standing ovation MarbleGlove, and will now search more of your stories to read. Thank you for sharing this one, it is honestly amazing.

Awwww. Thats so cute.