This is truly a great story! Keep it up.

wow, that was great.

Truly great fic. Characterizations were dead on and they were a joy to read.

WOW, this is definitely my favourite Labyrinth fic of all time. It's so dead on plus it's different from everything else out there. And I love the long length :) I'll definitely be re-reading this many times in the future

I said it last time and I stand by my opinion even more now.

This is certainly one of the very best Labyrinth fics ever posted on this site. So many people write story after story where the essential part is getting Jareth and Sarah together as if this was the epitome of their lives and nothing else really mattered. You're writing characters that are living their lives whilst winning each others love and it's stunning.

I am so glad you updated this. N.E.P. is still gorgeous to hear of and your nice little paragraph on the Fae warriors child minding skills was just enough to make me wonder exactly how much therapy that first generation is going to need. Also I utterly adore your theories on goblins. I wasn't very certain at first but this chapter has me hooked on the idea.

As last time, I earnestly hope you'll find more to write in this universe.

Sincerely,

Scales

That was very, very nice. It's a compelling world. Hard to grasp the endlessness of it, or the lack of constraints. I enjoyed the description of Jared almost getting lost in time. And his appreciation for boundaries. In the end, you've done a very interesting variation of a romance, almost (?) a negotiation of an alliance. And in that final scene, Sarah is winning Jared's heart (which she had all along, of course) by seducing Nasir right in front of him. Not seducing in the usual romantic sense, but by offering an old man his heart's desire. The story is rough and rich, not smooth and polished, but the richness is very impressive. I enjoyed it a lot.

this was just as good as the first!

~cd

umm... hell yes. this was great. beyond, even. one, i would really love to have that painting. two, i'm impressed that you managed to convey the painting so well, between colors and textures. i figure you for art in the real world.

i also really enjoyed your personifications of all the characters, especially the fae and the main characters. fantastic. just fantastic.

~cd

I love it! Jareth and Sarah are on the exactly right footing, and I cant wait to see where this goes. Oh, please keep it going!

Marbleglove,

once again you astound me, I loved meeting Theron and the glimpse of how Sarah's kingdom is evolving as she grows but my favourite part as always was the interaction between Jareth and her regarding Nasir.

Lovely description of her walking two path and finding a gift and an advisor at the same time, not to mention the history for Jareth's fascination with her and the trouble he had because he was too powerful.

I love it

If I could favorite individual chapters, this one would be the top of the list!

It has all of the essential parts of a good story: good characters, good grammar, great love story, and flying frying pans.

I really like this story you know.

Yet another amazing chapter! The visual of the ice tunnels, and the thought of being lost in time...pretty! The about Sarah walking multiple paths is wonderful, too!

Beautiful! It's complicated without being forced or rushed, and lovely vocab. There's a few little typos, but hardly noticeable. Loved it! Please write more-even if not on this storyline.

So loved his point of view for this chapter. Great revelations at the end:D How you come up with half of this stuff and make it make sense is beyond me! Bravo!

Waiting for more!